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my dad
has no one to speak to
death is that way
for all of us
though we cannot admit it now
(even though we say we can)
all of us
will finally
have no one to speak to
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Published 30th Oct 2012
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30th Oct 2012 11:42am
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30th Oct 2012 12:13pm
If silence is golden, this says a lot about where we place our values. Huge door, brave poem.
all of us
all of us
Anonymous
30th Oct 2012 2:16pm
nice
strider
strider
30th Oct 2012 4:16pm
nicenicenice
condensation of 'yes!'....ye
took'd
thee
w o r d s right'outta
My (&my deadDaDa's)
m
outh
condensation of 'yes!'....ye
took'd
thee
w o r d s right'outta
My (&my deadDaDa's)
m
outh
30th Oct 2012 7:23pm
31st Oct 2012 1:27am
Ouch. I don't like this at all, eesh. Because it's superb.
Tremendous write, Warrior Princess
Tremendous write, Warrior Princess
31st Oct 2012 5:50am
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