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Sex in the Champagne Room
Bobby is a regular who comes in once a week
Without too many friends, what some would call a geek
I spotted him last night across the club from afar
He was sitting all alone drinking Miller at the bar
Unlike many other clients, Bobby tends to tell the truth
Like how he’s only had three women and two were in his youth
Bobby is a sweet young man with your common kinks
Last night I sat beside him and we had a couple drinks
I learned that his girlfriend left him earlier that day
He told me he’d get laid that night even if he had to pay
He was at the club seeking courage to pick up a whore
Bobby was a good guy who had no clue what was in store
I excused myself and told him that I’d be right back
I walked up to Marcus and I asked him to cut me some slack
Marcus didn’t mind because he’s not a jealous guy
I slipped him a fifty to insure he would turn a blind eye
I walked back to the bar grabbing Bobby by the hand
How I’d get away with this, I hadn’t really planned
I led him through the club into the Champagne Room
A weekend night so it was packed, just as I assumed
Bobby reached into his pocket to pay my Champagne fee
I shook my head at him and said “This one is on me”
I got completely naked with the exception of my shoes
My buzz finally kicked in from the little bit of booze
I turned around, bending over, grinding on his dick
Then I lied back on him and used my sucking earlobe trick
I whispered in his ear that he’d get more than a dance
I told him “When I straddle you, please unzip your pants”
I did a few more tricks before I climbed upon his lap
His dick was hard, my cunt was wet, and running like a tap
He unzipped and slipped inside, filling up my hole
I had to make this fast as I grinded on his pole
My tits were in his face and I was whispering in his ear
I filled his mind with filthy thoughts and let my pussy steer
I felt his dick begin to throb as he shot his cum
He zipped his pants, I climbed off and ordered us some rum
Without too many friends, what some would call a geek
I spotted him last night across the club from afar
He was sitting all alone drinking Miller at the bar
Unlike many other clients, Bobby tends to tell the truth
Like how he’s only had three women and two were in his youth
Bobby is a sweet young man with your common kinks
Last night I sat beside him and we had a couple drinks
I learned that his girlfriend left him earlier that day
He told me he’d get laid that night even if he had to pay
He was at the club seeking courage to pick up a whore
Bobby was a good guy who had no clue what was in store
I excused myself and told him that I’d be right back
I walked up to Marcus and I asked him to cut me some slack
Marcus didn’t mind because he’s not a jealous guy
I slipped him a fifty to insure he would turn a blind eye
I walked back to the bar grabbing Bobby by the hand
How I’d get away with this, I hadn’t really planned
I led him through the club into the Champagne Room
A weekend night so it was packed, just as I assumed
Bobby reached into his pocket to pay my Champagne fee
I shook my head at him and said “This one is on me”
I got completely naked with the exception of my shoes
My buzz finally kicked in from the little bit of booze
I turned around, bending over, grinding on his dick
Then I lied back on him and used my sucking earlobe trick
I whispered in his ear that he’d get more than a dance
I told him “When I straddle you, please unzip your pants”
I did a few more tricks before I climbed upon his lap
His dick was hard, my cunt was wet, and running like a tap
He unzipped and slipped inside, filling up my hole
I had to make this fast as I grinded on his pole
My tits were in his face and I was whispering in his ear
I filled his mind with filthy thoughts and let my pussy steer
I felt his dick begin to throb as he shot his cum
He zipped his pants, I climbed off and ordered us some rum
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Re: Sex in the Champagne Room
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- Edited 22nd Oct 2012 11:18am
22nd Oct 2012 11:15am
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22nd Oct 2012 11:27am
Thank you Amanecio. I am always happy to see you in my poems' comment sections.
Holly
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22nd Oct 2012 3:10pm
Your favorite female poet, vivid? That is such an honor with thousands of great female poets around. I graciously and modestly thank you for the wonderful comment. :)
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22nd Oct 2012 3:02pm
That was a great read for the morning! Brilliantly written as always Holly. MilkyS
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22nd Oct 2012 3:11pm
Thank you Milky. It's always a joy to see you in my poems' comment sections.
Holly
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23rd Oct 2012 5:53am
I'm not threatening you Milky, I like you too much. Just an offer to engage and a promise to be satisfied. ;)
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24th Oct 2012 7:18am
I'm sorry boys but this is when Milky and I retreat to the privacy of a luxury suite featuring a hot tub for two. Let your minds wander where they will. ;)
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That's not fair, it's always up to my own mind to wander... I don't know which is better the poem I just read or the one that should be written after the hot tub scene that is going on in you luxury suite. I do hope you will be writing about that, both of you, Write, write, right away... JJ
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27th Oct 2012 1:03pm
LMAO! You will have to compare the two for yourself when the next one is written, Poetryman.
Holly
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22nd Oct 2012 3:17pm
Holly, why is it that the more I read your poems, the more I feel like I'm there. This simply made my dick throb.....to the rhythm. (Tis a lot to throb babygirl) The rhythm of this piece ironically had a feel like a song I love.....very lyrical almost like a country song- "the devil went down to Georgia, he was looking for a soul to steal. He was in a bind and way behind and willing to make a deal.......I like that very even, smooth rhythm of your words.
made me want to bust out of my pants and grant you a very creamy, copious......; )
Great write to start my morning, the morning person that I am >:-p~~
made me want to bust out of my pants and grant you a very creamy, copious......; )
Great write to start my morning, the morning person that I am >:-p~~
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23rd Oct 2012 4:09am
MrM,
Maybe it's because you wish you were there. I like throbbing and I like creamy. It means my writes are serving their purpose. ;) You called me babygirl! (cute, sexy giggle) Thank you for the comments.
Holly
Maybe it's because you wish you were there. I like throbbing and I like creamy. It means my writes are serving their purpose. ;) You called me babygirl! (cute, sexy giggle) Thank you for the comments.
Holly
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Anonymous
22nd Oct 2012 5:53pm
Holly,
What a great jesture of friendship and understanding. ; ) Great write as always. Keep the champagne flowing!
tornado
What a great jesture of friendship and understanding. ; ) Great write as always. Keep the champagne flowing!
tornado
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23rd Oct 2012 4:12am
Hey Tornado,
It's always flowing baby! I don't know if it was as much about friendship as it was a mercy fuck but either way it was fun. ;) Thank you for your comment.
Holly
It's always flowing baby! I don't know if it was as much about friendship as it was a mercy fuck but either way it was fun. ;) Thank you for your comment.
Holly
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Anonymous
- Edited 22nd Oct 2012 10:29pm
22nd Oct 2012 10:26pm
Nicely done Holly, as I was reading I spotted some poetic skills of yours that really keep the poem's flow your use of rhyme throughout the entire poem kept my interest and had me eager for the next line, and how easily you constructed the character "Bobby" in the first and second stanzas made the character much easier to understand and in turn improved the quality of your poem. Adding the use of human actions such as "I shook my head at him" etc. was a very nice touch too, your use of colloquial termology throughout the entire piece added to the informal, relaxed environment you've set here.
You've done wonderfully here, keep up the good work Holly, you've got serious talent.
You've done wonderfully here, keep up the good work Holly, you've got serious talent.
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23rd Oct 2012 4:19am
Evan,
Thank you very much. That was a very complimentary comment and I greatly appreciate your ability to observe the less noticable tools of the trade that I used to write this piece. As I have said before, I sharpen my tool set on my other sites but come here just to escape and do some theraputic writing in a place that's open to my more taboo topics. It is nice to have skill recognized, rather than just content, once in a while. Thanks again new friend.
Holly
Thank you very much. That was a very complimentary comment and I greatly appreciate your ability to observe the less noticable tools of the trade that I used to write this piece. As I have said before, I sharpen my tool set on my other sites but come here just to escape and do some theraputic writing in a place that's open to my more taboo topics. It is nice to have skill recognized, rather than just content, once in a while. Thanks again new friend.
Holly
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23rd Oct 2012 4:22am
You're more than welcome Holly, if i've the time I put all I can into a comment to help and don' get me wrong the content was damn exciting! Haha
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23rd Oct 2012 4:39am
I'm glad it turned you on Evan. I noticed your moniker. I'm glad a real live woman can turn you on too. [you seem to have a great sense of humor or else I wouldn't have gone there. As a woman who studied psychology, I am intrigued by your necrophilia. Let's chat about it if you are open to it.]
Holly
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23rd Oct 2012 4:46am
Absolutely, to private message we go.
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24th Oct 2012 3:18pm
My favorite stanza is the last one. You writing here is much like sex- playful and light yet at the same time dripping with the carnal need. It also was informative a bit. Have a question rolling around in my head that is very close to your poem.
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24th Oct 2012 3:57pm
Thank you for your comments Jazz. Please don't be bashful. What is your question?
Holly
Holly
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25th Oct 2012 10:16pm
Sometimes fulfilling someone else's fantasy is even better than someone fulfilling yours. I know how it is, and you told this story very well, Holly.
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25th Oct 2012 11:49pm
Thank you Honey. I was fulfilling my own fantasy while fulfilling his. I've been wanting to fuck back there for a long time. hehehe.
Holly
Holly
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31st Oct 2012 7:12am
Holly has a way with the liquid thay drips from her pen. A mind for great story telling and a way to get her readers drawn in to jave their dicks throbbing and juices flowing. Those are the characteristics of a great write. You're flawless with your ink. Very in control of what you say and release and leave the reader wondering. This is poetry. You keep this up keep that ink dripling mistresspieces on a canvas.
O.N.E!™
O.N.E!™
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31st Oct 2012 8:02am
Thank you P.S. That is a wonderful comment and you have just put a smile on my face with that compliment! :)
Holly
Holly
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9th Nov 2012 2:09am
WOW SWEETS, That was awesome I am a fan. Beautifully written. this is a keeper
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18th Jan 2013 2:16am
Can I come see you?? Lol Why did you stop writing on this site. You're so fucking good.
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1st Mar 2013 10:46am
Thank you, Blake. You are sweet. I'm back with more bodies slapping, cum flying and tempatures rising! Where are you?
Holly
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Anonymous
4th Jun 2013 3:23pm
Holly, your work is packed with enough sexual imagery to last three lifetimes and each of them flows just as silky as the constant stream of cum you describe.
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26th Jan 2014 5:17pm
this by far
is your bestest one
champagne sex and cum
well done
u saved a son
from a big B
HAPPY HE ALSO WON
is your bestest one
champagne sex and cum
well done
u saved a son
from a big B
HAPPY HE ALSO WON
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