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Rape Me
Drag me into a dark alley on the shady side of town
Blocks from the main strip without another soul around
In this urban jungle dimly lit by a new moon
I smell your drunken breath from your night at the saloon
Tear open my blouse to expose my large bare breasts
My nipples getting hard from the cool breeze upon my chest
Hike up my short skirt for easy access to my womanhood
There is no glamour here in the eastern end of Hollywood
Slam my sexy ass on the hood of an abandoned car
Rhetorically ask me if I moved here to become a star
Tightly grab my wrists and pin them down above my head
While I flashback to my childhood and everything my father said
Tell me that I’m yours and that I shouldn’t try to fight
Force your cock inside of me and bask in your delight
Grab my neck with your free hand cutting off my wind
While I pray for God’s forgiveness, wishing that I never sinned
I regain consciousness taking stock of the seedy situation
I’m in an alley with a stranger getting fucked with dedication
I feel my pussy getting wet and realize that I’m lucky
I’ve often dreamt of this and I moan out the words ‘Fuck me’
You look at me confused at my sudden change of heart
But my body language doesn’t lie, I want my pussy torn apart
You let go of my wrists, your hands now groping my large rack
I beg of you to cum in me while fucking me bareback
Your strong masculine body presses right up against mine
Your teeth meeting my collarbone tells me that it’s almost time
My pussy reaches climax, my eyes roll back into my head
Your dick dances inside of me as my pussy begs to be cum fed
You blow your massive load in me then disappear into the night
You leave my body glowing, this dark alley now seems light
I throw my clothes back on with your hot seed spilling out of me
I’m one step closer to nirvana in my quest for sexual discovery
Blocks from the main strip without another soul around
In this urban jungle dimly lit by a new moon
I smell your drunken breath from your night at the saloon
Tear open my blouse to expose my large bare breasts
My nipples getting hard from the cool breeze upon my chest
Hike up my short skirt for easy access to my womanhood
There is no glamour here in the eastern end of Hollywood
Slam my sexy ass on the hood of an abandoned car
Rhetorically ask me if I moved here to become a star
Tightly grab my wrists and pin them down above my head
While I flashback to my childhood and everything my father said
Tell me that I’m yours and that I shouldn’t try to fight
Force your cock inside of me and bask in your delight
Grab my neck with your free hand cutting off my wind
While I pray for God’s forgiveness, wishing that I never sinned
I regain consciousness taking stock of the seedy situation
I’m in an alley with a stranger getting fucked with dedication
I feel my pussy getting wet and realize that I’m lucky
I’ve often dreamt of this and I moan out the words ‘Fuck me’
You look at me confused at my sudden change of heart
But my body language doesn’t lie, I want my pussy torn apart
You let go of my wrists, your hands now groping my large rack
I beg of you to cum in me while fucking me bareback
Your strong masculine body presses right up against mine
Your teeth meeting my collarbone tells me that it’s almost time
My pussy reaches climax, my eyes roll back into my head
Your dick dances inside of me as my pussy begs to be cum fed
You blow your massive load in me then disappear into the night
You leave my body glowing, this dark alley now seems light
I throw my clothes back on with your hot seed spilling out of me
I’m one step closer to nirvana in my quest for sexual discovery
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Re: Rape Me
Anonymous
19th Oct 2012 2:57pm
Holly,
Well, you are right, that certainly is one more step. Like your flow in this one and loved the line:
"There is no glamour here in the eastern end of Hollywood"
That really set the mood. Interesting write. Enjoyed the read.
tornado
Well, you are right, that certainly is one more step. Like your flow in this one and loved the line:
"There is no glamour here in the eastern end of Hollywood"
That really set the mood. Interesting write. Enjoyed the read.
tornado
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19th Oct 2012 4:07pm
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19th Oct 2012 4:32pm
Very vivid...a little disturbing for me but written so well as always! Nice write once again Holly
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19th Oct 2012 5:49pm
Thank you Milky. This is a delicate subject with many people of course but I also know that there are other women out there like me who get off on rape fantasy. I'm sorry that you were distubed by the read sweetheart. :(
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19th Oct 2012 7:09pm
No,no, no...don't be sorry. I have had the fantasy too and you wrote it very well.
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20th Oct 2012 3:17am
Thanks Milky. I was hoping someone would fess up. It can be so hot but due to the taboo of the subject it is a big secret for most people who have this fantasy. Kudos for speaking up. :)
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20th Oct 2012 3:23am
Thank you Gabriel. I love the title "Violate Me" already! Who is the author? Where can I find it? Don't tease me Gabriel. Please, please give it to me. I need it! ;)
I will keep the sex flowing. That is the blessing (and the curse) of nymphomania.
I will keep the sex flowing. That is the blessing (and the curse) of nymphomania.
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20th Oct 2012 10:43am
Damn! That was so fucking hot! It's a shame that this author has disappered. I had so much to comment on too. Wow! Just Wow!
For those of you who liked 'Rape Me' here is link to an equally beautiful (or disturbing) poem. Enjoy.
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/20785-violate-me/
For those of you who liked 'Rape Me' here is link to an equally beautiful (or disturbing) poem. Enjoy.
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/20785-violate-me/
Re: Rape Me
19th Oct 2012 8:21pm
A disturbing fantasy, it worries me that this type of writing leads to someone trying it and someonelse getting hurt.
Certainly a fluent piece of writing
Certainly a fluent piece of writing
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20th Oct 2012 3:31am
Thank you gardenlover. It is indeed disturbing but that was one of the goals in this write. It's also a really hot fantasy! At the risk of coming off as somewhat of a bitch, a poem will not cause anybody to rape someone else but if somebody feels that they must then I would hope that they take their sexual aggression out on the author of this poem. ;)
Re: Rape Me
Anonymous
19th Oct 2012 8:41pm
Fact is its a fantasy no harm no foul great thing about fantasies is that you pick your rapist verses real life any
how i get it, well done!
how i get it, well done!
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20th Oct 2012 3:42am
Thank you for your comment, mememe. We do get to choose our rapists in a rape fantasy.
If I may make a suggestion to anyone who wishes to partake in this fantasy for the first time: Please be sure that your partner is somebody you have a lot of trust in and who you feel very comfortable with. A lot of unexpected emotion can come up during rape roleplay. It is important to have someone who can handle your emotional baggage.
If I may make a suggestion to anyone who wishes to partake in this fantasy for the first time: Please be sure that your partner is somebody you have a lot of trust in and who you feel very comfortable with. A lot of unexpected emotion can come up during rape roleplay. It is important to have someone who can handle your emotional baggage.
Re: Rape Me
20th Oct 2012 4:16am
I love it.
So wonderfully naughty and sexy.
It all flows so smoothly.
Just like your other poems.
Such an excitingly erotic soul.
All of your writing simply drips of it.
Well done.
So wonderfully naughty and sexy.
It all flows so smoothly.
Just like your other poems.
Such an excitingly erotic soul.
All of your writing simply drips of it.
Well done.
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20th Oct 2012 4:57am
Re: Rape Me
20th Oct 2012 5:09am
Loved the change in psyche between being raped then enjoying it. Turned me on....
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20th Oct 2012 5:14am
Turned me on too. ;) Thank you so much for leaving this comment Slayer. This is the heart of the poem. It's not as much about the physical/sexual actions taking place as it is about the psychological that drives the actions. Good eye!
Re: Rape Me
You draw nuances here that have two competing emotions. The negative act of no consent with and the pleasure and then "nirvana" at the end. I think it is fair to say that the term is not what one normally links to that act, which leads to what you were writing about, a fantasy.
Although you claim your goal is to entertain, I think with that write you have a few people thinking!
Although you claim your goal is to entertain, I think with that write you have a few people thinking!
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re: Re: Rape Me
20th Oct 2012 5:53am
I should probably edit that Jazz. ONE OF my goals is to entertain. Some of this poem is in fact fantasy but there is a lot of reality bubbling just beneath the surface.
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20th Oct 2012 5:54am
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20th Oct 2012 6:01am
Thank you Blunt Trama. I take it this aroused you. If so then I am content with the knowledge that this write served one of it's purposes. Please share what aroused you about it. Feel free to message me if you're not comfortable sharing that information in this venue.
Holly
Holly
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20th Oct 2012 9:41am
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20th Oct 2012 1:26pm
(giggles) Thank you Vivid but you can keep your cold water. I like it hot! ;)
Re: Rape Me
20th Oct 2012 7:08pm
Well my dear Holly (awe, an old familiar Parliament tune comes to mine...."Holly wants to go to California")
Not supporting rape ( unless you consider a really rough fantasy session as you've described as rape), I find this creation absolutely captivating. I found my dick swollen and hard after the first stanza and by the end, I was oozing and throbbing (yeah probably TMI) but to be able to capture the heat and friction of such a virulent, violent, savage, and sadistic fuck was a real turn on. Very vivid babygirl as a good write should be. My favorite word paintings were....
"Tell me that I’m yours and that I shouldn’t try to fight
Force your cock inside of me and bask in your delight
Grab my neck with your free hand cutting off my wind
While I pray for God’s forgiveness, wishing that I never sinned
I regain consciousness taking stock of the seedy situation
I’m in an alley with a stranger getting fucked with dedication
I feel my pussy getting wet and realize that I’m lucky
I’ve often dreamt of this and I moan out the words ‘Fuck me’
and then
"You blow your massive load in me then disappear into the night
You leave my body glowing, this dark alley now seems light
I throw my clothes back on with your hot seed spilling out of me
I’m one step closer to nirvana in my quest for sexual discovery"
I've said it to you before child, "U soooooo....nasty" (and I like it)
Not supporting rape ( unless you consider a really rough fantasy session as you've described as rape), I find this creation absolutely captivating. I found my dick swollen and hard after the first stanza and by the end, I was oozing and throbbing (yeah probably TMI) but to be able to capture the heat and friction of such a virulent, violent, savage, and sadistic fuck was a real turn on. Very vivid babygirl as a good write should be. My favorite word paintings were....
"Tell me that I’m yours and that I shouldn’t try to fight
Force your cock inside of me and bask in your delight
Grab my neck with your free hand cutting off my wind
While I pray for God’s forgiveness, wishing that I never sinned
I regain consciousness taking stock of the seedy situation
I’m in an alley with a stranger getting fucked with dedication
I feel my pussy getting wet and realize that I’m lucky
I’ve often dreamt of this and I moan out the words ‘Fuck me’
and then
"You blow your massive load in me then disappear into the night
You leave my body glowing, this dark alley now seems light
I throw my clothes back on with your hot seed spilling out of me
I’m one step closer to nirvana in my quest for sexual discovery"
I've said it to you before child, "U soooooo....nasty" (and I like it)
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20th Oct 2012 7:41pm
MrM,
It's never TMI. Never! I WANT TO KNOW if my poetry is making pussies wet and dicks hard because I need to search for a new technique if it is not. I'm happy to hear that pre-cum was oozing as a result of this write. I just feel bad that I wasn't there to finish you off. (sexy giggle) I like that you like that I'm so nasty. There is no benefit to being a nymphomaniac without being a nasty mymphomaniac! Thank you for your comments. FYI, I love it when you call me babygirl!
Holly
It's never TMI. Never! I WANT TO KNOW if my poetry is making pussies wet and dicks hard because I need to search for a new technique if it is not. I'm happy to hear that pre-cum was oozing as a result of this write. I just feel bad that I wasn't there to finish you off. (sexy giggle) I like that you like that I'm so nasty. There is no benefit to being a nymphomaniac without being a nasty mymphomaniac! Thank you for your comments. FYI, I love it when you call me babygirl!
Holly
Re: Rape Me
24th Oct 2012 10:05am
I have a couple friends with this fantasy, and it seems like it'd be great one to role play. Loved this piece, seeing as to how you wrote all eroticas, check out mine sometime. Maybe we can collab on a piece? again great poem.
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24th Oct 2012 10:09am
Thank you for the comment Visual Lyricist. I have a few collabs in the works right now here but I am open to writing with you in the future. I will check out your work.
Holly
Holly
Re: Rape Me
25th Oct 2012 6:24am
Reading your poems is bliss. Bravo for all the thrilling Hotness -- and your deep explorations of the psyche!
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27th Oct 2012 1:04pm
Re: Rape Me
27th Oct 2012 7:45pm
This was VERY vivid. With the title and even the contents it was more a bit of extreme love.
"Your strong masculine body presses right up against mine
Your teeth meeting my collarbone tells me that it’s almost time
My pussy reaches climax, my eyes roll back into my head
Your dick dances inside of me as my pussy begs to be cum fed"
this really throws me head first into what you wrote.
Guess it will be a very horny saturday now! haha. great work. :)
"Your strong masculine body presses right up against mine
Your teeth meeting my collarbone tells me that it’s almost time
My pussy reaches climax, my eyes roll back into my head
Your dick dances inside of me as my pussy begs to be cum fed"
this really throws me head first into what you wrote.
Guess it will be a very horny saturday now! haha. great work. :)
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27th Oct 2012 7:48pm
Thank you for your flattering comments Charles. I'm happy that it came off so vivid and extreme. I take that as a great compliment.
Holly
Holly
Re: Rape Me
29th Oct 2012 3:26am
your words are addicting, this is my favorite it sends pleasant chills up my spine. and they always get me so hot, my girl was wondering what had gotten into me the other day. you are very talented.
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29th Oct 2012 4:20am
Re: Rape Me
1st Nov 2012 9:53pm
Not sure if I'm suppose to like the imagery here but I most certainly do. There was so much sexiness, and that deep passion with your stanza that began with "slam my sexy ass on the hood of an abandoned car!" That's fire right there. That's the spontaneous things one must roll olay with. Another nicely written scribe.
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Re: Rape Me
2nd Nov 2012 10:36pm
Thank you P.S. I always appreciate your comments. That is a pretty damn sexy line, if I may say so myself! hehe
Holly
Holly
Re: Rape Me
7th Mar 2013 8:11pm
While the subject may be taboo I loved this.
A beautiful erotic adventure.
"Hike up my short skirt for easy access to my womanhood
There is no glamour here in the eastern end of Hollywood"
Raw and vivid a great write.
A beautiful erotic adventure.
"Hike up my short skirt for easy access to my womanhood
There is no glamour here in the eastern end of Hollywood"
Raw and vivid a great write.
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16th Jun 2013 6:16am
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Anonymous
14th Jul 2013 3:01am
Have we met? I really needed to sink my teeth deeply into that naked shoulder...DeeeLishus!
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24th Sep 2013 5:53pm
Re: Rape Me
oh man I dont believe what I just read..
I can't keep my mouth shut this is dope.. ahh that being said what a wild dream u have taken Me too . I definitely don't stand for rape to satisfy my needs but this hooked me some how..... NOW THAT IS A TALENT.....
my favorite lines
Tear open my blouse to expose my large bare breasts
My nipples getting hard from the cool breeze upon my
chest
Hike up my short skirt for easy access to my
womanhood
There is no glamour here in the eastern end of
Hollywood
Slam my sexy ass on the hood of an abandoned car
Rhetorically ask me if I moved here to become a star
Tightly grab my wrists and pin them down above my
head
While I flashback to my childhood and everything my
father said.
the last line u said about ur father shows u r still his sweetie
n this wild desires doesn't change it at all.
n then u getting into it .woo great scene captured thru out..
definitely would like to read more of ur work..
cyanide.
I can't keep my mouth shut this is dope.. ahh that being said what a wild dream u have taken Me too . I definitely don't stand for rape to satisfy my needs but this hooked me some how..... NOW THAT IS A TALENT.....
my favorite lines
Tear open my blouse to expose my large bare breasts
My nipples getting hard from the cool breeze upon my
chest
Hike up my short skirt for easy access to my
womanhood
There is no glamour here in the eastern end of
Hollywood
Slam my sexy ass on the hood of an abandoned car
Rhetorically ask me if I moved here to become a star
Tightly grab my wrists and pin them down above my
head
While I flashback to my childhood and everything my
father said.
the last line u said about ur father shows u r still his sweetie
n this wild desires doesn't change it at all.
n then u getting into it .woo great scene captured thru out..
definitely would like to read more of ur work..
cyanide.
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re: Re: Rape Me
1st Nov 2013 5:32pm
Thank you, Cyanide Kid. I haven't written anything erotic for a while but the requests keep rolling in for more so I may have to get down and dirty again soon for my followers.
Holly
Holly
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13th Nov 2013 4:20am
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30th Dec 2013 5:39pm
Rape Me.......
That is exactly what you did
You captured me in this write
As I devilishly dove in
You tide me up with your words and phrasing
letting me freely fascinate about raping
You had me at asking for forgiveness to thanking god for the stains running down your leg.
Thank you Glamphomaniac (Glamorous Nymphomaniac)
That is exactly what you did
You captured me in this write
As I devilishly dove in
You tide me up with your words and phrasing
letting me freely fascinate about raping
You had me at asking for forgiveness to thanking god for the stains running down your leg.
Thank you Glamphomaniac (Glamorous Nymphomaniac)
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4th Jan 2014 7:48pm
Glamphomanic! Hahaha! I like it. I'm glad this got in your head. Thank you.
Holly
Holly
Re: Rape Me
19th Jan 2014 2:34am
why be only a STAR
go to the
RAPE CITY OF THE WORLD
And be a
RAPE QUEEN
LEGS WILL BE TORN APART
BY SO MANY
go to the
RAPE CITY OF THE WORLD
And be a
RAPE QUEEN
LEGS WILL BE TORN APART
BY SO MANY
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20th Jan 2014 5:29pm
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29th Jan 2014 4:07pm
Damn it Holly!! I have a Few dark alleys, but I can't find your hott ass! lol loved this blazing fantasy :)
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1st Feb 2014 5:04pm
I'm one alley to your north and three to your east, getting plowed like east coast snow.
Holly
Holly
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Anonymous
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27th Aug 2017 3:34pm
I'm sorry that happened to you, sweetheart. It's crazy how that leads to promiscuity (or the polar opposite for some) as well as rape fantasies.
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Anonymous
21st Dec 2015 9:07pm
Fuck this is hot. Well done!
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22nd Oct 2017 7:53pm
every part of me is telling me I shouldn't enjoy this as much I am
thanks for raping my innocence <3
thanks for raping my innocence <3
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Re. Rape Me
17th Nov 2021 1:18pm
Wow! what a vivid expression of in-depth feelings. Nothing is wrong being sexual and sometime have wild fun to satiate our inner being. I love her profile with great details of education, work and background and maintaining her anonymity. I would love to read her more. You may tell me your other four websites where you publish your stories. Keep up the blood running high.
Kristopher Sanders
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