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watching the sky
Salmon sky
pink yet orange
Melted sunlight
Ready for sleep
Mango horizons
Golden highlights
Silver trim
Bleeding purples
Melt in the distance
Like spilled wine
Intricate skylines
slowly evaporating
Nighttime is coming
The moon arrives
Neon white
Crystalized outlines
Exotic twinkles
Revealing other worlds
Flourescent stars
Gripping my eyes
As I look up
watching The sky
pink yet orange
Melted sunlight
Ready for sleep
Mango horizons
Golden highlights
Silver trim
Bleeding purples
Melt in the distance
Like spilled wine
Intricate skylines
slowly evaporating
Nighttime is coming
The moon arrives
Neon white
Crystalized outlines
Exotic twinkles
Revealing other worlds
Flourescent stars
Gripping my eyes
As I look up
watching The sky
Published 12th Oct 2012
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12th Oct 2012 3:41am
12th Oct 2012 5:05am
Very nice imagery. :) I could imagine the transition of the day to night very well.
12th Oct 2012 5:07am
12th Oct 2012 9:16am
Anonymous
12th Oct 2012 4:30pm
zorro1,
Nice! I was watching that same sky last night ; ) Love me some mango horizons! Enjoyed!
tornado
Nice! I was watching that same sky last night ; ) Love me some mango horizons! Enjoyed!
tornado
12th Oct 2012 9:53pm
Poem is like a zen act of being in "wakefulness" or "suchness," the only place to be. You asked that I read some of your poems. Great idea. Now I can be part of the "was" that "is."
marcella1
marcella1
13th Oct 2012 00:04am
14th Oct 2012 8:19am
This makes me really want to go star gazing. Plus, I love watching the sunset.
