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Fragrance
Boucheron,
the scent of a licked nipple,
devoured as if the antidote
to some exotic fever.
I have often dreamed
that such a fragrance
might have danced
a circumspect delivery
of lace and satin
the color
of unfolding flowers,
sheer and delicate,
the tiptoed
expression of a kiss;
it so behooves me
that simply to take it in
from any distance
is to ruin the stride
of any other passerby.
runningturtle87
the scent of a licked nipple,
devoured as if the antidote
to some exotic fever.
I have often dreamed
that such a fragrance
might have danced
a circumspect delivery
of lace and satin
the color
of unfolding flowers,
sheer and delicate,
the tiptoed
expression of a kiss;
it so behooves me
that simply to take it in
from any distance
is to ruin the stride
of any other passerby.
runningturtle87
Published 4th Oct 2012
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4th Oct 2012 5:21pm
wow once again you had me at the very first line
amazing work as always
zenith
amazing work as always
zenith
4th Oct 2012 5:35pm
Thanks, Zen.... I don't know if you have ever had occasion to take a whiff of this stuff, but it is pure sex in a bottle to me...I literally can't stand up....So, I go to the counter where they sell it and find myself flirting with the clerk and asking for her subtle tactile inter-locutions and find an inter-dental fricative that sends me looking for the gobble-you-ups in the shoe department.
19th Sep 2015 10:42pm
Anonymous
4th Oct 2012 5:31pm
Well done, rt.
Strider
Strider
4th Oct 2012 5:44pm
I'm not sure why anyone would bother with any other drug, Strider. It is completely addictive and will render you senseless, but a $200 bottle lasts for weeks and will tease the haiku right out of you.
4th Oct 2012 8:14pm
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5th Oct 2012 12:38pm
"It" what, Dear G? And a "few" what else then? Your mysteries multiply by the question! Ahem!
8th Oct 2012 9:08am
5th Oct 2012 10:02am
How fragrance can evoke the saddest memories to the most wonderful.
Nicely penned RT.
Nicely penned RT.
8th Oct 2012 12:30pm
You may have noticed how I've used the bottle itself to cover the nipple of my tutued dancer...a graphic representation of how the fragrance itself is such a persistent reminder of the odors of the combined elements...a wet kiss and an erect nipple....I had to put the cap on it lest the significance escape into the comments. Thank you, Magda.
