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Moonlit Dancing
Sweet Lady of the Moon
adorn the waking hour
with your golden graces
and the ballad of your story
Your gentle intensity beckons
a walk along the trail
of discoveries hidden
in the quiet peaceful still
The heavens become your dance floor
the moon your spotlight
on life's center stage
turned the stars
into drizzled droplets
of dazzling diamonds
Laughter of children tickles your lips
till you are smiling stars
reflecting brightness
into the island of your iris
of crystal blue waters
On the earthy verdure
bamboo and lilies dot the canvas
snapshots of life emerging
fragrant and steadfast
Words spoken and sown
into the soil of my mind
flourishing inspiration
roots from the earth of my being
Outgrowing restraint
tearing at the seams
of sheltered understanding
sepal of soul making way
for petals to bathe
in the sun of self discovery
An autumn thunderstorm
injects a symphony of prowess
dancing in the ballroom
of the heavens at tea time
As the echo of sharing fades
the sun rises to kiss the earth
pulling back sheets of silk blue black sky
as giggling stars close their eyes
adorn the waking hour
with your golden graces
and the ballad of your story
Your gentle intensity beckons
a walk along the trail
of discoveries hidden
in the quiet peaceful still
The heavens become your dance floor
the moon your spotlight
on life's center stage
turned the stars
into drizzled droplets
of dazzling diamonds
Laughter of children tickles your lips
till you are smiling stars
reflecting brightness
into the island of your iris
of crystal blue waters
On the earthy verdure
bamboo and lilies dot the canvas
snapshots of life emerging
fragrant and steadfast
Words spoken and sown
into the soil of my mind
flourishing inspiration
roots from the earth of my being
Outgrowing restraint
tearing at the seams
of sheltered understanding
sepal of soul making way
for petals to bathe
in the sun of self discovery
An autumn thunderstorm
injects a symphony of prowess
dancing in the ballroom
of the heavens at tea time
As the echo of sharing fades
the sun rises to kiss the earth
pulling back sheets of silk blue black sky
as giggling stars close their eyes
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18th Sep 2012 4:19pm
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19th Sep 2012 2:11am
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Anonymous
18th Sep 2012 4:38pm
Giggling stars are real, Soul Man.
Thank you.
Strider
Thank you.
Strider
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19th Sep 2012 2:12am
Anonymous
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18th Sep 2012 4:54pm
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19th Sep 2012 2:13am
Re: Moonlit Dancing
18th Sep 2012 5:16pm
unique and masterfully penned...love the passion and imagery as well...kudos, my friend!
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19th Sep 2012 2:14am
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19th Sep 2012 2:15am
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18th Sep 2012 5:38pm
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19th Sep 2012 2:15am
Re: Moonlit Dancing
18th Sep 2012 6:41pm
The images are magical, surreal, breathtaking...
Straight to my heart as well as my list.
Straight to my heart as well as my list.
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19th Sep 2012 2:17am
Re: Moonlit Dancing
18th Sep 2012 6:41pm
As enchanting as the wonder of stars. I love the passionate dance you have created with your words, and I agree, the imagery was skillfully painted.
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19th Sep 2012 2:17am
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19th Sep 2012 2:18am
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Anonymous
20th Sep 2012 00:15am
wow you are good. I like your way of seeing
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re: Re: Moonlit Dancing
20th Sep 2012 00:36am
Thanks for wandering in. We all have a worldview... mine is a bit out of the ordinary.
Re: Moonlit Dancing
20th Sep 2012 3:08am
The heavens become your dance floor
the moon your spotlight
on life's center stage
turned the stars
into drizzled droplets
of dazzling diamonds
This is a great write Soulman... Enjoyed Sir
the moon your spotlight
on life's center stage
turned the stars
into drizzled droplets
of dazzling diamonds
This is a great write Soulman... Enjoyed Sir
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21st Sep 2012 2:48am
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Anonymous
20th Sep 2012 7:26pm
This is such a beautiful and endearing write- embracing the love and beauty that is what it's really ALL about..I enjoyed the read and the perfect transitions into harmonic flow..you have captured a true essence of spirit in this one, great write!
peace
peace
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21st Sep 2012 2:48am