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Accidental Bliss
You Kiss Down My Neck And Whisper Sweet Nothings In My Ear
Its Only In Your Arms That I Dont Feel The Fear
The Fear Of Being Alone, Having To Be On My Own
My Promiscuity Takes Me Places I Wish I Could Forget
Yet With You, Deep Inside Me, Sedating Me, I Learn To Forgive.
Here I Am In This Accidental Bliss I Know Its Not Mine
Losing You Is Only A Matter Of Time
But Im Addicted...
In You I See Myself, When Im On Top Of You
Rocking With You, I Find The Person I Long To Be
In Your Eyes I See Sympathy As If You Understand
But How Can That Be When I Dont Even Know Who I Am?
Were Just The Same Yet So Opposite
I Want To Leave But Im Too Foolish To Quit
You Spread My Legs And Lick My Tenderness
You Make Love So Hard To Resist
I Looked At Sex As Mechanical, No Emotion
Yet With You Its Become Real, And I Feel A Sudden Devotion
And It Scares Me...
Here I Am In This Accidental Bliss I Know Its Not Mine
Losing You Is Only A Matter Of Time
But Im Addicted...
I Open My Eyes And Remember Its Just A Dream Now..
My Accidental Bliss ... Its Just Memories
For Brian Martinez... The One Who Got Away
Its Only In Your Arms That I Dont Feel The Fear
The Fear Of Being Alone, Having To Be On My Own
My Promiscuity Takes Me Places I Wish I Could Forget
Yet With You, Deep Inside Me, Sedating Me, I Learn To Forgive.
Here I Am In This Accidental Bliss I Know Its Not Mine
Losing You Is Only A Matter Of Time
But Im Addicted...
In You I See Myself, When Im On Top Of You
Rocking With You, I Find The Person I Long To Be
In Your Eyes I See Sympathy As If You Understand
But How Can That Be When I Dont Even Know Who I Am?
Were Just The Same Yet So Opposite
I Want To Leave But Im Too Foolish To Quit
You Spread My Legs And Lick My Tenderness
You Make Love So Hard To Resist
I Looked At Sex As Mechanical, No Emotion
Yet With You Its Become Real, And I Feel A Sudden Devotion
And It Scares Me...
Here I Am In This Accidental Bliss I Know Its Not Mine
Losing You Is Only A Matter Of Time
But Im Addicted...
I Open My Eyes And Remember Its Just A Dream Now..
My Accidental Bliss ... Its Just Memories
For Brian Martinez... The One Who Got Away
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Re: Accidental Bliss
12th Sep 2012 5:54am
This is so much more than just an erotic poem. I like how you touch on the soul-stirring aspect of it. Love this part:
"In You I See Myself, When Im On Top Of You
Rocking With You, I Find The Person I Long To Be
In Your Eyes I See Sympathy As If You Understand
But How Can That Be When I Dont Even Know Who I Am?"
I'm personally not a fan of capitalizing every word but that's just me.
This is a great intro to what I hope is more to come from you!
"In You I See Myself, When Im On Top Of You
Rocking With You, I Find The Person I Long To Be
In Your Eyes I See Sympathy As If You Understand
But How Can That Be When I Dont Even Know Who I Am?"
I'm personally not a fan of capitalizing every word but that's just me.
This is a great intro to what I hope is more to come from you!
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re: Re: Accidental Bliss
12th Sep 2012 6:03am
Thank You Very Much Im Glad You Enjoyed It! And I Know Its An Old Habit , Hard To Break Haha (The Capitalizing Of Each Word)
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Anonymous
12th Sep 2012 5:55am
Such emotion !! I really enjoyed reading this!!
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12th Sep 2012 6:03am
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The melancholy tone gives you poem a depth that one doesn't usually associate with descriptions of sex. I hope that someday you can look back at Brian and not have as much remorse.
Welcome to DU.
Welcome to DU.
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12th Sep 2012 10:23am
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12th Sep 2012 9:40am
Beautiful stuff keep doing with it I love your use of words. Check out some of my poems as well if you like :)
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12th Sep 2012 10:23am
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12th Sep 2012 11:11am
Raw, honest, passion is in every word here, and it is beyond simply being erotic... it is a self-expression of tenderness, longing, and yearning for not just a beloved person but also a single beloved moment in time shared with that person. Such is love, and that is what you have written about here. A very blissful poem indeed!
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re: Re: Accidental Bliss
12th Sep 2012 5:42pm
Thank you! Im So Glad You Can Feel And Understand What I Did While Writing This!
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12th Sep 2012 11:49am
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13th Sep 2012 00:52am
Enjoyed it from beginning to end! I can totally relate to this. Good job!
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13th Sep 2012 2:15am
Re: Accidental Bliss
13th Sep 2012 4:03am
So many people can relate to this poem and I appreciate that you keep it real and on such an emotional level.
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13th Sep 2012 4:11am
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13th Sep 2012 7:27am
Just listened to the reading...damn! The passion and emotion in your voice was overwhelming to me! I'm thinking all of your poems need to be read by you...it really drives in the emotion that you're trying to express through the words.
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re: Re: Accidental Bliss
13th Sep 2012 8:09am
thank you im sooo glad you liked it! thank you for being so supportive of my work ill admit i was nervous to join let alone put my poems with spoken word haha
Re: Accidental Bliss
13th Sep 2012 10:45pm
Yeah, it's very nice. I mean it is clear by your stat's that you don't need to email people asking for input. But, is it what it is.
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14th Sep 2012 00:44am
well i apologize if i bothered you, i simply liked your poetry and wanted your personal oppinion. my mistake .
Re: Accidental Bliss
15th Sep 2012 5:26pm
Some lines were very deep...like
"In You I See Myself, When Im On Top Of You //Rocking With You, I Find The Person I Long To Be//
& My Promiscuity Takes Me Places I Wish I Could Forget//
Yet With You, Deep Inside Me, Sedating Me, I Learn To Forgive.//"
That captured my attention....Very good poem. Deep as well !!!
"In You I See Myself, When Im On Top Of You //Rocking With You, I Find The Person I Long To Be//
& My Promiscuity Takes Me Places I Wish I Could Forget//
Yet With You, Deep Inside Me, Sedating Me, I Learn To Forgive.//"
That captured my attention....Very good poem. Deep as well !!!
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15th Sep 2012 10:18pm
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24th Jan 2014 8:39pm
You Spread My Legs And Lick My Tenderness
You Make Love So Hard To Resist
Promiscuity
You reach out to the horizon of sexual escapades as the sun spreads kits rays you spread your legs in wantonness so I guess
when women enjoy a man's sword some love it hard and when many drink many a kind of milk they get addicted then there is no comma no full stop all licking becomes divine tis like heavens cumming wine and then is born promiscuity as one may call it I call it infidelity and born out of sexual greed more than promiscuous need
just a spontaneous draft
hope u will relish it
as another experience
You Make Love So Hard To Resist
Promiscuity
You reach out to the horizon of sexual escapades as the sun spreads kits rays you spread your legs in wantonness so I guess
when women enjoy a man's sword some love it hard and when many drink many a kind of milk they get addicted then there is no comma no full stop all licking becomes divine tis like heavens cumming wine and then is born promiscuity as one may call it I call it infidelity and born out of sexual greed more than promiscuous need
just a spontaneous draft
hope u will relish it
as another experience
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