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< a slap or a kiss >
every day repeats itself
every minute
and this second
i remember
how you were
i remember
yesterday
i remember
just how you were
only the sesame chicken
was garlic beef
and your crying
was more subdued
you
were in another room
the one with the white carpet
(white carpet is always a mistake)
and you?
well
i'm just repeating yesterday
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Published 31st Aug 2012
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31st Aug 2012 2:28pm
Zydeco vertigo deja vu....stepping back on my own foot, your small poems make think too much, and that's just right. Thanks for the write.
31st Aug 2012 2:34pm
Anonymous
31st Aug 2012 6:33pm
"only the sesame chicken
was garlic beef
and your crying
was more subdued"
was garlic beef
and your crying
was more subdued"
Anonymous
31st Aug 2012 8:53pm
slap lemmy...kiss it
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