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Heavy write. Very profound.

This reminds me of the concept of Live Data....tech savvy writing....

yes, nothing like creating an executable from the least significant bits of a .jpg, and, oh hell,
lets make it self-modifying and point to it from your mom's facebook picture...  :)

i always feel guilty (and a little ninja-esque) when i add a poem of yours to my reading list without commenting, but i never have the words necessary to make a worthwhile statement. so instead i'll just leave it at that and say that i enjoyed peeling the #949494's and #B5B5B5's of this apart.

Any poem I put on my reading list certainly doesn't require my pitifully cute comments.  
Not that it stops me most times, but it's usually an inane paraphrase of  
"i liked it".  
Which, BTW, I find nothing wrong with.
 
Your comment, BTW, all #949494's and #B5B5B5's of it, made me smile.  

You're piece  reminds me a lot of EE Cummings. I enjoyed this one quite a bit.

Ah! Someone who capitalizes E. E. Cummings' name. In the KNOW!
 
I originally started using mostly lowercase as an attempt to imitate Cummings
as he was the first poet I hero-worshiped. Later, I should have grown out of it as it's
become quite dated, but, no. Nothing says "poetry" like not using uppercase and
I find it's handy to remind people what it is, put them in the proper frame. :) :) :)

Superb. Gritty and open, writing always seems so casual for you. Nicely done.

I try REALLY hard; sweat bullets, blood, what-not to appear casual.  
I'm glad you're willing to be fooled; or else, willing to say you are.
Either way: you made me pitifully happy when you said that.

This was a great poem, I enjoyed reading it.

Ah! Always happy YOUR magic is available to me.
 
The phrase "real and available" is the cousin of "live and direct".
  

well i have to say you impressed me here, its short and its deep [not like i like my men} but how i like my poetry