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6:21

6:21,
an end to all their fun,
she's hiding behind the locked door,
she can't hear his foot steps any more.

6:22,
she sits still, can't think of what to do.
time ticks off the clock,
trying to pick the door lock.

6:23,
how could it be?
how did she miss the gun shot?
the tears that burn her face are hot.

6:24,
she doesn't want to live anymore,
his life fading away,
she can't find the words to say.

6:25,
he's barely alive,
the slick revolver coated in his blood fits her hand perfectly,
pull the trigger..1.2.3.

6:26,
one last kiss.
shaky hands grip,
dhe tries but her hands slip.


6:27,
i love you deven,
she pulls the trigger, the deed is done,
they're both gone.

6:28,
the paramedics arrive a little to late...
Written by ZeZeZapp (Xena)
Published | Edited 26th Oct 2012
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