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A Beautiful Day
It Was a Beautiful Day
The bluest of blue
was the omniscient sky
on that day
Love’s first dance
rousing, energizing.
We two creatures of earth
happily unaware
of what is to be.
The toilers toiling,
teachers teaching,
learners learning.
dreamers dreaming,
fighters fighting,
and lovers loving.
But for two
whose journey veered
on course and
put them in perfect time,
at that place,
on that beautiful day,
for reasons now known,
seasons eternally sown,
The toilers kept toiling,
teachers teaching,
and learners learning.
The dreamers kept dreaming,
fighters fighting,
and lovers loving.
And the blue sky
kept its joyful watch
over the knowing,
until the sun set
and starlight moved
and truth collided
with providential bliss,
two souls now bound;
changed forever.
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A Beautiful Day
22nd Jul 2012 11:18am
Sounds blissful and a beautiful place. A wonderful write Ken, the song is lovely too. :)
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Anonymous
22nd Jul 2012 12:07pm
Awesome job here Soul Man. I love the place you describe.
Strider :)
Strider :)

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Anonymous
22nd Jul 2012 1:09pm
What a beautiful poem and nice video...made it an uplifiting experience....in the morning....
good work.....
good work.....

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22nd Jul 2012 9:53pm
Yes Kitty, the video fits well. Love is beautiful and can turn a dismal day into a fiesta.
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22nd Jul 2012 6:34pm
Theatrical, how you tie it together at the end is beautiful. How you describe such a love, so much passion, it vibes a benevolent tone
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Anonymous
23rd Jul 2012 3:56pm
I absolutely adore this..such a beautiful way to portray such things as love and life, well done , (tips hat) Peace, Miki

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