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Where I Am
Where am I today?
Parallel to the cut horizon
Riding a current of introspection
Skimming fingers through oceans of amour
Confronting wind resistance cresting my face
I close my eyes
My soul sees ahead
beyond the boundaries of today
The view is magnificent
Magenta rays transcend to vibrant life
Behind my eyes
The sun of my soul
Lambency of desire
A sconce on my visage
I fear not the fall
as my feet are earth-stained
I lick the sublime drops from my fingers
They slide down my soul's throat;
nourishing
Love brings color to monochrome
Breathe...
Breathe Deep
With me
Parallel to the cut horizon
Riding a current of introspection
Skimming fingers through oceans of amour
Confronting wind resistance cresting my face
I close my eyes
My soul sees ahead
beyond the boundaries of today
The view is magnificent
Magenta rays transcend to vibrant life
Behind my eyes
The sun of my soul
Lambency of desire
A sconce on my visage
I fear not the fall
as my feet are earth-stained
I lick the sublime drops from my fingers
They slide down my soul's throat;
nourishing
Love brings color to monochrome
Breathe...
Breathe Deep
With me
Published 26th Jun 2012
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Anonymous
26th Jun 2012 9:17pm
You are in the right place here Soul Man!
Nicely done.
Strider :)
Nicely done.
Strider :)
26th Jun 2012 10:31pm
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26th Jun 2012 10:33pm
"They slide down my soul's throat,nourishing" Wonderful.
It seems where you are is most definitely the right place.
A beautiful piece Ken. :)
It seems where you are is most definitely the right place.
A beautiful piece Ken. :)
26th Jun 2012 10:45pm
Thank you Magdalena.
an aside... I saw Dr. John 2 weeks ago in concert and he belted out "Right Place" which I love.
an aside... I saw Dr. John 2 weeks ago in concert and he belted out "Right Place" which I love.
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28th Jun 2012 1:26am
Now you are grooving. Warren is awesome. I got to see The Deep End concert in New Orleans.
26th Jun 2012 11:12pm
Now I know why you're the Soul Man..you have such a beautiful outlook on life and you just shine as does your writing..peace Crim :)
26th Jun 2012 11:20pm
Thank you Crim. It's a delight being here and getting to know some amazing people as you.
27th Jun 2012 00:45am
This was great. The last line, to me doesn't fit. But other then that it's perfect
27th Jun 2012 1:51am
27th Jun 2012 1:45am
Sir Ken
Truly the soul man.:)
This is very well done. It shows that you
have spent your time, read your books, thought
and reflected and rejected and accepted what
stayed with you for the longest period. In other
words experience.
Love your choice of words and the smooth, effortless flow.
I especially loved the line where there is reference to earth-stained feet. That was beautiful.:)
I rarely see monochrome. [happy to see it here]
Write on,
Sumeet
Truly the soul man.:)
This is very well done. It shows that you
have spent your time, read your books, thought
and reflected and rejected and accepted what
stayed with you for the longest period. In other
words experience.
Love your choice of words and the smooth, effortless flow.
I especially loved the line where there is reference to earth-stained feet. That was beautiful.:)
I rarely see monochrome. [happy to see it here]
Write on,
Sumeet
27th Jun 2012 1:53am
Sumeet, my pleasure meeting such a gentleman. I appreciate your giving as you ponder my heartspeak. Thank you.
