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< all about you again >
it was winter
just a while ago
but now
it's spring
and spring
is all about you again
you and your face
seen turning
just a glimpse
a flash of eye
a blue
a green
a glint of sun
reflected
in your words
and breasts
and legs
and what you say
with
your
clear
smile and spring
is all about you again
and summer
is you
you and your hands
pulling the boat about
in sea
and clouds
as white
as sails
and fall
and you
as bright as red
and leaves
that dust us
in their orange and brown
and winter
leaves its coat on us
the white of snow
the black of branches reaching out to spring
and spring will be
all about you again
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Published 26th Jun 2012
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Anonymous
26th Jun 2012 4:25am
Nice write....
Strider
Strider
26th Jun 2012 6:59am
26th Jun 2012 7:38am
26th Jun 2012 7:50am
this is so wonderful i can't stand it. you have a gift for such perfection in simplicity (not to take away from your difficult-to-get-a-head-around poems) and they leave me lighter, opened in a way. love it. [:
19th Jul 2012 9:51am
you're a sucker for the lovey-dovey stuff aren't you?
hey, you can admit it.
me? oh, well, damn, love poems are my eternal favs.
best damn poems out there!
and those little goose bumps and tingles i get when i'm writing one...
heaven!
hey, you can admit it.
me? oh, well, damn, love poems are my eternal favs.
best damn poems out there!
and those little goose bumps and tingles i get when i'm writing one...
heaven!
not *all* lovey-dovey poems... a very few in fact. mush has been known to make me ill on the odd occassion. but you do it so innocently and... freely, multidimensionally maybe... i don't know what you do; goddamnit, ray, but you do it well.
26th Jun 2012 2:07pm
"so wonderful I can't stand it" either....(thnx Jest)
TopNotch (whateverthfck that means)
TopNotch (whateverthfck that means)
Anonymous
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26th Jun 2012 5:07pm
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26th Jun 2012 6:20pm
Sir Ray
I had fallen in love with this
poem in 'Favoritism' competition.
A winner in every aspect.:)
Thank you for sharing this.
Sumeet
I had fallen in love with this
poem in 'Favoritism' competition.
A winner in every aspect.:)
Thank you for sharing this.
Sumeet
27th Jun 2012 8:31pm
28th Jun 2012 00:03am
Aw. That was so... freaking beautiful is what it was, and sweet and purely romantic.
That's the poem every chick wishes was tucked under her coffee cup in the morning. Seriously. You should pimp it as a greeting card. ~ B
That's the poem every chick wishes was tucked under her coffee cup in the morning. Seriously. You should pimp it as a greeting card. ~ B
28th Jun 2012 3:11am
