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Unmade bed (A farewell to DUP)
You left,
but the sheets are still tangled -
not from sleep,
but from the way I arched
when you whispered
things that made me bite my lip
just to stay quiet.
This bed remembers.
The slick press of skin,
the gasp I tried to hide,
the way I stayed there after -
thighs still parted,
pillow still wet.
You thought you got away clean.
But come closer,
breathe in -
my scent’s still clinging
to your thoughts.
Still sweet.
Still soaked.
Still waiting
for your fingers
to misbehave again.
but the sheets are still tangled -
not from sleep,
but from the way I arched
when you whispered
things that made me bite my lip
just to stay quiet.
This bed remembers.
The slick press of skin,
the gasp I tried to hide,
the way I stayed there after -
thighs still parted,
pillow still wet.
You thought you got away clean.
But come closer,
breathe in -
my scent’s still clinging
to your thoughts.
Still sweet.
Still soaked.
Still waiting
for your fingers
to misbehave again.
Author's Note
Mmm… so this is how it ends?
You, me, and a trail of poems still warm from the touch.
You made my words throb.
Made me whisper things out loud I was only supposed to write.
And every time you read me…
I felt it.
Thank you for every moan disguised as a metaphor,
every comment that made me bite my lip.
This site may shut down,
but you and I?
We’ll still live in the lines we set on fire.
Stay hot, stay reckless,
and never stop stroking that pen like it deserves it. 😈
(and a big thank you to webmistress and all the mods)
You, me, and a trail of poems still warm from the touch.
You made my words throb.
Made me whisper things out loud I was only supposed to write.
And every time you read me…
I felt it.
Thank you for every moan disguised as a metaphor,
every comment that made me bite my lip.
This site may shut down,
but you and I?
We’ll still live in the lines we set on fire.
Stay hot, stay reckless,
and never stop stroking that pen like it deserves it. 😈
(and a big thank you to webmistress and all the mods)
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Re. Unmade bed (A farewell to DUP)
7th May 2025 1:06am
Let your fingers do the walking in the pink pages....
The poems are not over....we'll all be around.
The poems are not over....we'll all be around.
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Re: Re. Unmade bed (A farewell to DUP)
7th May 2025 1:13am
Mmm, such tempting words... yes the poems aren’t over, because some of us were always meant to write between the lines, tracing desire with fingertips; letting the rhythm of our feelings curl like whispers in the dark.
If you all are still around, I will let my pen keep dancing… but only if you promise to touch me very deeply like you do...
Walking through my pink folds again and again.
If you all are still around, I will let my pen keep dancing… but only if you promise to touch me very deeply like you do...
Walking through my pink folds again and again.
Re: Re. Unmade bed (A farewell to DUP)
7th May 2025 1:21am
Have pen, will unravel. People aren't done yet. What's next?
And, threaten me with a good time....
And, threaten me with a good time....
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Re: Re. Unmade bed (A farewell to DUP)
7th May 2025 1:44am
Ah yes what's next... That is the question isn't it, so I won't let you slip away so easy.
Haha, I am always a good time... ;)
Haha, I am always a good time... ;)
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Yesterday 10:20pm
Re. Unmade bed (A farewell to DUP)
7th May 2025 1:29am
Adorable Alluring Amazing Angelic Appealing Attractive Awesome Blooming Breathtaking Captivating Charming Classy Cool Cutiepie Dazzling Debonair Delightful Divine Elegant Enticing Exotic Fabulous Glamorous Glowing Gorgeous Graceful Hot Impressive Innocent Incredible Incomparable Intriguing Irresistible Joyous Lovely Magic Majestic Marvellous Outstanding Phenomenal Princess Pretty Precious Polished Radiant Regal Remarkable Ravishing Riveting Sensuous Striking Spectacular Speechless Splendid Wondrous
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Re: Re. Unmade bed (A farewell to DUP)
7th May 2025 1:41am
Well, aren’t you just a walking thesaurus of temptation… I’m tempted to ask what you'd say if we went beyond the alphabet… though something tells me your imagination doesn’t stop at Z. I feel like I’ve just been gift-wrapped in compliments just so you can unwrap me again. If that was your way of flirting, consider me smitten - now tell me, do you always leave a trail of dazzled poets in your wake, or am I just the lucky one tonight? ;)
Re. Unmade bed (A farewell to DUP)
7th May 2025 1:52am
I’ve been gone a long time! But I love the direction your writing has taken and your growth!!! Keep writing!
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Re: Re. Unmade bed (A farewell to DUP)
7th May 2025 12:06pm
Hi Julia, it's so nice to see you again even though sadly the site is coming to an end. I really appreciate all your thoughts that you have shared with me and I love that you like the direction of my writing. I became more comfortable sharing. Thank you for the encouragement.
Re. Unmade bed (A farewell to DUP)
I wish I had gotten a chance to know you better Kx.
Maybe down the road we’ll share some KLP.
Did you know I was fan ??
We'll always have the Swans
BIG LIKE your writing
All sizzle and plenty of steak
I like your hat
Maybe down the road we’ll share some KLP.
Did you know I was fan ??
We'll always have the Swans
BIG LIKE your writing
All sizzle and plenty of steak
I like your hat
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Re: Re. Unmade bed (A farewell to DUP)
7th May 2025 12:10pm
Oh God, I want a Key Lime Pie so bad now. The kind that's so tart it makes your lips pucker; which of course makes me think of other deserts lol. I kind of knew you were a fan but I like it when you tell me again. haha And yes, Black Swans always, I so enjoyed swimming in those words with you. And now I want a coffee cured filet steak too... That's just mean.
Oh yeah and my hat... you noticed. ;)
Oh yeah and my hat... you noticed. ;)
Re. Unmade bed (A farewell to DUP)
7th May 2025 3:50am
This tryst might say goodnight but there always is a tomorrow and a chance encounter in between your lines..thanks K
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Re: Re. Unmade bed (A farewell to DUP)
7th May 2025 12:18pm
Oh, aren’t you the charming little echo slipping between my stanzas like you belong there... (and you do)
A tryst may say goodnight, but with a tease like that, I doubt you’re done with me - or my lines - just yet.
You sound like trouble waiting to happen… the kind I might just let sneak in after dark.
So go ahead, take your “chance encounter.”
Just know: once you’re in between my lines…
I don’t let go easily.
A tryst may say goodnight, but with a tease like that, I doubt you’re done with me - or my lines - just yet.
You sound like trouble waiting to happen… the kind I might just let sneak in after dark.
So go ahead, take your “chance encounter.”
Just know: once you’re in between my lines…
I don’t let go easily.
Re. Unmade bed (A farewell to DUP)
7th May 2025 5:20am
You sure do have your way with words. Your brand of poetry brings words to life. I like that.
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Re: Re. Unmade bed (A farewell to DUP)
7th May 2025 12:25pm
Mmm, I do like a man who knows when he's being seduced - word by word.
But the real fun? It's in how you feel them… sliding under your skin, making you wonder if I’m writing a poem or foreplay. haha
If my poetry brings words to life, imagine what I could do with a little more… intention.
So tell me… are you just enjoying the read, or are you fantasizing about … * nevermind, naughty look *
But the real fun? It's in how you feel them… sliding under your skin, making you wonder if I’m writing a poem or foreplay. haha
If my poetry brings words to life, imagine what I could do with a little more… intention.
So tell me… are you just enjoying the read, or are you fantasizing about … * nevermind, naughty look *
Re. Unmade bed (A farewell to DUP)
7th May 2025 7:12am
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7th May 2025 12:29pm
A fine farewell, Ron… but something tells me you’re just leaving the door open for more, aren’t you?
I’ll take the love and light, but I have to admit - I’m more interested in the sparks you left behind.
Who knows? Maybe our next encounter will be a little less “farewell” and a lot more sparks.
you know where to find me. :)
I’ll take the love and light, but I have to admit - I’m more interested in the sparks you left behind.
Who knows? Maybe our next encounter will be a little less “farewell” and a lot more sparks.
you know where to find me. :)
Re: Re. Unmade bed (A farewell to DUP)
7th May 2025 12:32pm
Well, well, it seems my poem caught your attention in the best way possible. ;)
I can tell you’re already imagining what comes next, and trust me, you’re not alone in that.
But be careful, darling - flirting with this kind of heat is like playing with fire.
Want me to turn up the heat just a little more? haha
Made me think of this one,
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/411777-your-masculine/
I can tell you’re already imagining what comes next, and trust me, you’re not alone in that.
But be careful, darling - flirting with this kind of heat is like playing with fire.
Want me to turn up the heat just a little more? haha
Made me think of this one,
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/411777-your-masculine/
Re. Unmade bed (A farewell to DUP)
7th May 2025 12:06pm
Dear K,
I’m going to miss your sweet naughty 😉.
You injected your kindness in every write and response you created here. You’ve been such a wonderful support for me along the way and I will forever cherish your extreme thoughtfulness when you spoke one of my poems. That single act of kindness still brings tears. Thank you. H xx 🌷
I’m going to miss your sweet naughty 😉.
You injected your kindness in every write and response you created here. You’ve been such a wonderful support for me along the way and I will forever cherish your extreme thoughtfulness when you spoke one of my poems. That single act of kindness still brings tears. Thank you. H xx 🌷
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Re: Re. Unmade bed (A farewell to DUP)
7th May 2025 12:35pm
Aww, H, you’re making me blush with those sweet words… but I won’t deny there’s always been a lot of naughty mixed in with the kindness. ;)
I’m just glad I could be a support for you (and others) - and maybe add in a lot of mischief too. haha You’ve got a way with your words that deserves all the attention, and I can’t help but want to be there for every line you create.
I’m not going anywhere, though. You know, kindness and naughtiness always find their way back to where they’re needed most sometimes.
So, don’t worry… this connection isn’t going anywhere. <3
I’m just glad I could be a support for you (and others) - and maybe add in a lot of mischief too. haha You’ve got a way with your words that deserves all the attention, and I can’t help but want to be there for every line you create.
I’m not going anywhere, though. You know, kindness and naughtiness always find their way back to where they’re needed most sometimes.
So, don’t worry… this connection isn’t going anywhere. <3
Re. Unmade bed (A farewell to DUP)
7th May 2025 7:46pm
I will miss you my friend. I'll remember our poems together as they were a joy to do.
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Re: Re. Unmade bed (A farewell to DUP)
7th May 2025 7:58pm
Oh, I like it when you get sentimental… you know I was always the dangerous distraction in our poetic duo. ;)
But yes - I'll miss our wicked little word dances, the way we teased the lines and blurred a few boundaries along the way. Our poems were more than just joy… they were trouble, and you know how much I love trouble.
So don't behave yourself... I’ll be smiling whenever I remember the sparks from those poems. ;)
But yes - I'll miss our wicked little word dances, the way we teased the lines and blurred a few boundaries along the way. Our poems were more than just joy… they were trouble, and you know how much I love trouble.
So don't behave yourself... I’ll be smiling whenever I remember the sparks from those poems. ;)
Re: Re. Unmade bed (A farewell to DUP)
8th May 2025 00:53am
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Yesterday 1:56am
Well damn… if I’m stirring both your heart and your hormones, I must be doing something right. 😈💔
Re. Unmade bed (A farewell to DUP)
7th May 2025 9:41pm
Simply amazing. You always "make an entrance" and this poem is one heck of an Exit.
It's been a pleasure & gratifying to get to know you. Truly enjoyed your wit and enthusiasm, and that wild rollercoaster, bordello, haunted house ride through your thoughts. Of course, you are a fave.
No longer a protege - but a master.
Ciao Bella
-Leo
It's been a pleasure & gratifying to get to know you. Truly enjoyed your wit and enthusiasm, and that wild rollercoaster, bordello, haunted house ride through your thoughts. Of course, you are a fave.
No longer a protege - but a master.
Ciao Bella
-Leo
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Re: Re. Unmade bed (A farewell to DUP)
7th May 2025 9:46pm
Leo… you always did know how to flatter a girl with just the right mix of charm and mischief.
If this was my "exit," then I hope I left you dizzy - like any proper bordello-haunted-house-rollercoaster should. You held on for the ride like a true gentleman... or was that a devil in disguise? Either way, you made the chaos even more fun.
Master, huh? Careful - say things like that and I might just have to come back and prove it. haha
Ciao for now... but don’t blink. You never know when I’ll sneak back in, heels clicking and heart racing. Well into another place but don't forget about me damnit.
If this was my "exit," then I hope I left you dizzy - like any proper bordello-haunted-house-rollercoaster should. You held on for the ride like a true gentleman... or was that a devil in disguise? Either way, you made the chaos even more fun.
Master, huh? Careful - say things like that and I might just have to come back and prove it. haha
Ciao for now... but don’t blink. You never know when I’ll sneak back in, heels clicking and heart racing. Well into another place but don't forget about me damnit.
Re. Unmade bed (A farewell to DUP)
7th May 2025 9:58pm
How wonderful and perfect is your "Swan Song." Tears of joy swell as I think of not reading your poems, But I have a folder for the evening dream. Hugs and MUCH love. Oral
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Re: Re. Unmade bed (A farewell to DUP)
7th May 2025 10:19pm
Oral… you sure know how to make a girl feel like her words left a mark that won’t fade.
A whole folder just for me? Now that’s dangerously flattering… I can only imagine the things you’ll do with those “evening dreams.”
Let’s just say, if my poems made you feel something, I hope it lingers in all the right places. ;)
Swans are elegant, yes, but this one’s always had a bit of a wicked streak. You never know when I might come gliding back in, all curves and chaos. haha
A whole folder just for me? Now that’s dangerously flattering… I can only imagine the things you’ll do with those “evening dreams.”
Let’s just say, if my poems made you feel something, I hope it lingers in all the right places. ;)
Swans are elegant, yes, but this one’s always had a bit of a wicked streak. You never know when I might come gliding back in, all curves and chaos. haha
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7th May 2025 10:21pm
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7th May 2025 10:28pm
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7th May 2025 11:01pm
Re: Re. Unmade bed (A farewell to DUP)
Yesterday 1:55am
You're making it impossible not to smile right now, you know that? 💕 “Sweet one” might just be my new favorite name. You have this way of making even the simplest words feel like a warm touch. Thank you so much for everything.
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Yesterday 8:45am
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Yesterday 6:28am
Couldn't think of hotter parting words than this:
Stay hot, stay reckless,
and never stop stroking that pen like it deserves it. 😈
You have been a pleasure to read and comment on.
Stay hot, stay reckless,
and never stop stroking that pen like it deserves it. 😈
You have been a pleasure to read and comment on.
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Re: Re. Unmade bed (A farewell to DUP)
Yesterday 1:01pm
Mmm, hearing my words echoed back like that? Now that’s a turn-on. 😈 You saying goodbye or just trying to make me want to chase you down with another verse or two? Because if you think I’m done stroking that pen - with heat, hunger, and just the right pressure - you don’t know what kind of trouble you’ve inspired. :) Thanks so much SS, it's been my pleasure...
Re. Unmade bed (A farewell to DUP)
Yesterday 9:46pm
Aah, sweet Kx, you are one of a kind! Who else could make saying goodbye to DUP so damn sexy??!
It's been a wild ride here in your bouncy castle... but I especially like when we get little peeks into the windows of your big, warm heart.
I look forward to reading more of you, wherever the wind takes us next... I just know this isn't goodbye!
Keep stirring the pot...
❤k
It's been a wild ride here in your bouncy castle... but I especially like when we get little peeks into the windows of your big, warm heart.
I look forward to reading more of you, wherever the wind takes us next... I just know this isn't goodbye!
Keep stirring the pot...
❤k
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Re: Re. Unmade bed (A farewell to DUP)
Yesterday 11:34pm
Ohhh, you... always knowing exactly where to slip your hand - in between the lines, right into the soft parts. 😈
If this bouncy castle’s walls could talk, they would tell about all the sexy things we’ve shared... and maybe laugh at the ones we haven’t yet. But you? You’ve seen past the play, caught glimpses through the window when I thought the curtains were drawn. That doesn’t go unnoticed.
This may be a goodbye to one playground, but we will find another. The wind’s a flirt, and so are we - and I’m ready to see where it takes us next.
I’ll be stirring the pot… and saving you a spoon. 😘
If this bouncy castle’s walls could talk, they would tell about all the sexy things we’ve shared... and maybe laugh at the ones we haven’t yet. But you? You’ve seen past the play, caught glimpses through the window when I thought the curtains were drawn. That doesn’t go unnoticed.
This may be a goodbye to one playground, but we will find another. The wind’s a flirt, and so are we - and I’m ready to see where it takes us next.
I’ll be stirring the pot… and saving you a spoon. 😘