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Vegan to her is Ketchup
Perfection sucks
Give me ripped pantyhose
A button missing
Slutty in places of worship
My women curse a lot
Have ink on their hands
Dime store nail polish
Bad attitude
Vegan to her is ketchup
Health is codeine cough syrup
Blow jobs are her currency
Black leather jacket ripped at the elbow
Give me ripped pantyhose
A button missing
Slutty in places of worship
My women curse a lot
Have ink on their hands
Dime store nail polish
Bad attitude
Vegan to her is ketchup
Health is codeine cough syrup
Blow jobs are her currency
Black leather jacket ripped at the elbow
Published 3rd Apr 2025
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3rd Apr 2025 2:51am
I think Bukowski, would be proud. Nicely penned, Speak. Fantastic read my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
3rd Apr 2025 2:53am
3rd Apr 2025 3:03am
You do The Man proud, and that title is fucking hilarious.
My friend, you seriously are a light in the universe. Keep fucking shining.
My friend, you seriously are a light in the universe. Keep fucking shining.
3rd Apr 2025 3:05am
That's a beautiful comment Betty
We should have our own radio show and take calls from the depraved ...
BIG THANKS
We should have our own radio show and take calls from the depraved ...
BIG THANKS
3rd Apr 2025 3:04am
hello dearest Poet I don't why but this made me think of a dance routine these women are doing and their underwear are torn and for some reason it turns me on lol I get this sexy man...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n3VB4dQuQ00
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n3VB4dQuQ00
3rd Apr 2025 3:08am
Ripped panties always does it for me..
The more showing the better..
Rude and crude and throw in some nude ...
Thx B ..
The more showing the better..
Rude and crude and throw in some nude ...
Thx B ..
3rd Apr 2025 4:36am
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3rd Apr 2025 12:13pm
Nicely Done with raw and uncut straight forward feelings of a emotional thrill 😁👊👏🏍️ STONE RIDER 🏍️💯
3rd Apr 2025 1:04pm
Keeping it real
No pretense
Relationships do better that way...
Thanks Stone Rider !
No pretense
Relationships do better that way...
Thanks Stone Rider !
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3rd Apr 2025 9:34pm
I once left a pair of hose draped over a hedge. Somehow it seemed appropriate at the time. You had me at the first stanza
3rd Apr 2025 10:19pm
4th Apr 2025 2:10pm
I was gonna say, your write does have that Charles Bukowski type misery about it. I have a 500 page anthology of his poems. I don't pick the book up as much as I should. I'm only on page 170 even though the book is 5 years old now! I'm reading it now, lol. 😁
4th Apr 2025 2:14pm
6th Apr 2025 6:55am
"Blow jobs are her currency" reminds me a Run the Jewels lyric "...when in Rome, I gave the face, Please pay with dome."
BL
BL
6th Apr 2025 11:31am
