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Lips
I want your mouth on me
On every part that’s exposed
On every part that is not
I need those lips to take me
To a place that this world cannot define
Just kiss me…..just me
Kiss me in a place only you visited
No one had the key
Ha, you never needed the key
The door was open just for you
Place those lips on my heated
Skin
Taste me
On every part that’s exposed
On every part that is not
I need those lips to take me
To a place that this world cannot define
Just kiss me…..just me
Kiss me in a place only you visited
No one had the key
Ha, you never needed the key
The door was open just for you
Place those lips on my heated
Skin
Taste me
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Re. Lips
16th Mar 2025 5:45am
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Re. Lips
16th Mar 2025 7:23am
Seductive. Key lines:
I want your mouth on me
On every part that’s exposed
On every part that is not [yet!]
Kiss me in a place only you visited
No one had the key
I want your mouth on me
On every part that’s exposed
On every part that is not [yet!]
Kiss me in a place only you visited
No one had the key
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16th Mar 2025 12:09pm
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Re. Lips
16th Mar 2025 11:42am
Just make sure your teeth are brushed! Thanks Fia for the awesome poem.
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16th Mar 2025 12:46pm
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16th Mar 2025 3:38pm
I like where the young man is placing his hands. The passion of new love being played out in the sunshine, in pure clear water. WOW! 😊
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16th Mar 2025 3:45pm
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16th Mar 2025 6:31pm
Thanks for the invitation. Wow what a dream to fulfil. I'm on my way. Hugs and love, Oral
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16th Mar 2025 6:33pm
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17th Mar 2025 4:35am
Seductively penned, Fia. Into the list it belongs! You always raise the temperature with your writes, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
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17th Mar 2025 10:18pm
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17th Mar 2025 10:15pm
I thoroughly enjoyed your write, each line has depth and invites you to read more, like delving into a delicious pie x
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17th Mar 2025 10:19pm