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Little Girl With A Purpose
I see that little girl everyday
She always runs to wherever she's going
Xmas came and left her with a bike
Now she rides up & down the street
It seems she never gets tired
She always plays by herself
I saw her the other day standing with her bike next to all these other kids who were much older than she
She wasn't even paying attention to them
She was standing there because they were
The older ones were smoking and talking a bunch of loud mouthed shit
All at once she got on her bike and sped away like she had some important place to be
Today she's playing alone with a ball
She runs up and down the street chasing it as it bounces past the crack dealers hanging out in front of her apartment building
I wonder if she'll ever get out of this neighborhood without turning into some poverty case criminal fuck up
She probably won't
It's too bad
I've been here a long time and I've seen so many innocent children, turn into the environment
And it's not good
But right now...She's got more on the ball then those crack dealing scumbags ever will
Let's hope she keeps it that way for the rest of her life
She always runs to wherever she's going
Xmas came and left her with a bike
Now she rides up & down the street
It seems she never gets tired
She always plays by herself
I saw her the other day standing with her bike next to all these other kids who were much older than she
She wasn't even paying attention to them
She was standing there because they were
The older ones were smoking and talking a bunch of loud mouthed shit
All at once she got on her bike and sped away like she had some important place to be
Today she's playing alone with a ball
She runs up and down the street chasing it as it bounces past the crack dealers hanging out in front of her apartment building
I wonder if she'll ever get out of this neighborhood without turning into some poverty case criminal fuck up
She probably won't
It's too bad
I've been here a long time and I've seen so many innocent children, turn into the environment
And it's not good
But right now...She's got more on the ball then those crack dealing scumbags ever will
Let's hope she keeps it that way for the rest of her life
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Re. Little Girl With A Purpose
27th Feb 2025 00:36am
Where I grew up at I have seen this scenario play out so many times. Many make it, a lot of times they don't.
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27th Feb 2025 00:40am
A kid has to be strong. One step ahead of the junkies, the dealers and the law. If they can juggle it all and still have a childhood, then that kid might make it out.
Thanks man for the read & comment.
Thanks man for the read & comment.
Re. Little Girl With A Purpose
27th Feb 2025 00:43am
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27th Feb 2025 00:46am
This is true. It could happen. Thanks for the feedback my friend. xo
Re. Little Girl With A Purpose
27th Feb 2025 00:49am
What an accurate scene... well described.
And, that's why we always look for silver linings. Hopefully she shines.
And, that's why we always look for silver linings. Hopefully she shines.
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Re: Re. Little Girl With A Purpose
27th Feb 2025 00:50am
Re. Little Girl With A Purpose
27th Feb 2025 2:33am
Sometimes there's a eagle in the chicken coop. Hopefully that will be her. I like your point about her having more going for her than the trashy adults. So often true.
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Re: Re. Little Girl With A Purpose
27th Feb 2025 11:33am
I think most kids are witty and intelligent and pure. By their mid to late teens they dumb down. Appreciate the feedback.
Re. Little Girl With A Purpose
27th Feb 2025 6:05am
Powerful write, Keith. I sure hope she gets out, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
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27th Feb 2025 11:33am
Re. Little Girl With A Purpose
27th Feb 2025 10:47am
For now, we have to give her the benefit of the doubt and hope for the best. Stupendous writing.
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27th Feb 2025 11:34am
Re. Little Girl With A Purpose
an utterly humane n compassionate love & observation n a wishful wish this whole scribe is.. reflects your beautiful soul .. it only tells of our truthful human condition is nothing but that of nature .. that loves love.. that loves innocence that loves life .. that loves to be wishing loving holding helping leading .. if not explicit, but in silence ..
Aww i talked of the narrative so much than the impressive lil girl you captured.. cos fir me the soul of a narrative sings screams here more loud n profound!! Such amazing this is .. as per me .. this tone of yours is the most expressive impressive n moving.. simply spellbound am I Keith.. hoping more such from you xx
Aww i talked of the narrative so much than the impressive lil girl you captured.. cos fir me the soul of a narrative sings screams here more loud n profound!! Such amazing this is .. as per me .. this tone of yours is the most expressive impressive n moving.. simply spellbound am I Keith.. hoping more such from you xx
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Re: Re. Little Girl With A Purpose
27th Feb 2025 8:18pm
Hello Uma. Happy to know you enjoyed this piece. It was a different style then what i usually write. The narrative was all about the girl and her environment. If she can smash down walls and break on through to the other side. Appreciate the comments and RL.
Re. Little Girl With A Purpose
27th Feb 2025 10:14pm
We are usually a product of our environment and are influenced by those around us. A girl like this needs good role models that can show her there's a better life out there if she works hard enough to get out.
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27th Feb 2025 11:54pm
Re. Little Girl With A Purpose
28th Feb 2025 10:02am
Wow! Sounds like me but I grew up in a decent neighborhood with no one my age so I played ny myself all the time and look how I turned out lol
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28th Feb 2025 10:16am
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