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The Satisfying Wash
Sit down, take a seat
I can't control myself
she's about to wash my hair
her gorgeous body inches from my face
the water & her fingers interact with my scalp
the shampoo she uses has this sweet, flowery scent
my eyes close as I begin thinking of impure thoughts
for the few moments i have with her, it's total ecstasy
faucets shut off, towel around my head and neck and it's over
maybe next time she can shampoo my hair at my place
I can't control myself
she's about to wash my hair
her gorgeous body inches from my face
the water & her fingers interact with my scalp
the shampoo she uses has this sweet, flowery scent
my eyes close as I begin thinking of impure thoughts
for the few moments i have with her, it's total ecstasy
faucets shut off, towel around my head and neck and it's over
maybe next time she can shampoo my hair at my place
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Re. The Satisfying Wash
25th Feb 2025 10:55am
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25th Feb 2025 11:03am
HA! WOW! No comments from PAR. It had to be that good then. Glad you enjoyed it my friend. Thanks for the RL.
Re. The Satisfying Wash
25th Feb 2025 12:23pm
Scent - such a strong aphrodisiac. I think it's a great idea to take her to your place - bring on the shampoo :-)
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25th Feb 2025 5:24pm
Those fingers running through your hair, massaging your scalp, shampoo... Yea Feeling a lot of something off of this Keith
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25th Feb 2025 5:28pm
Re. The Satisfying Wash
I can relate to that having had my hair washed a few times by a young woman hairdresser in her shop.
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25th Feb 2025 7:19pm
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25th Feb 2025 7:52pm
This was during the 1990s when the shop was then run by three lovely women (of which she was one) who started it after their previous boss bought the business they then worked in then sacked them, so I have adopted this shop henceforth. Since then the personnel have changed and there is now at least one man among them.
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Re. The Satisfying Wash
25th Feb 2025 9:35pm
wait, i can smell the shampoo as well !! lol. i liked the sensuality here.
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26th Feb 2025 00:06am
Re. The Satisfying Wash
25th Feb 2025 11:28pm
Haha I always cut my ex's hair for him naked. I think he liked it xD
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Re. The Satisfying Wash
26th Feb 2025 5:23am
Beautifully penned, Keith. Do you think of her every time you smell shampoo? Great write, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
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Re: Re. The Satisfying Wash
26th Feb 2025 10:55am
Depends if that shampoo has a unique smell, that sends me back. Thanks man.