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Vulnerability
Have you ever loved someone so much you want to submit everything to them?
You want to make sure every angle is covered, the hunger you have for there touch and presence more than anything. Knowing you shouldn't be so vulnerable but oh my the feeling of vulnerability is something else. You trust everything with this one person, everything and everyone else becomes a blur and a distant memory.
Published 19th Feb 2025
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Anonymous
19th Feb 2025 7:40pm
I have not loved anyone that much and I'm not sure if that is love or addiction.
Nice thoughts though.🙏
Nice thoughts though.🙏
20th Feb 2025 6:04am
Favourite passage:
Knowing you shouldn't be so vulnerable but oh my the feeling of vulnerability is something else. You trust everything with this one person, everything and everyone else becomes a blur....
When a relationship gives you that rush that others don't, the one-track fixation becomes understandable.
Knowing you shouldn't be so vulnerable but oh my the feeling of vulnerability is something else. You trust everything with this one person, everything and everyone else becomes a blur....
When a relationship gives you that rush that others don't, the one-track fixation becomes understandable.
21st Feb 2025 9:08am
Wow, this resonates. It's like you've captured that intoxicating feeling of being completely consumed by someone. Makes me wonder if anyone's ever felt this way about my amazing self... Just putting it out there."
21st Feb 2025 3:49pm
21st Feb 2025 8:29pm
Yes. Falling in love redefines everything and your write certainly captured this. 🌼
25th Feb 2025 5:42am
It's a beautiful and yet scary emotion to be at that juncture fearing the worst and yet feeling the best.
Nicely penned.
Nicely penned.
27th Feb 2025 12:42pm
Great write! Been there with endless thoughts - all consuming in moments and days, weeks, months. But a crushing end came that changed my life. Still think about her, more than 40 years later. Enjoyed this very much! Great food for thought! Thanks for sharing.
