My Muse

Wow, that's...really something. It feels really raw and honest. Like someone's genuinely struggling to put their feelings into words. The metaphors are cool, especially the 'misty rain' and 'Amazon sun' ones. But the ending, 'You are mine,' that's...bold. It kinda changes the whole tone, you know? Makes it feel less like a poetic exploration and more, like, possessive? Or maybe just really, really intense. Either way, it's definitely got me thinking.

Thank you, Mr Black. I am glad that it has you thinking.;))

I get this

My muse is inspirational to the max

BIG LIKE

Thank you, Poet;))

Outstanding piece Fia. Love the wording & the format. Great job.

Thank you, Keith ;))

This is amazing 👏 for sure your words bring a depth to the emotions of the feelings 💯👊👏

Thank you, Stoney;)

You are welcome 🤗

Beautifully penned, Fia. Into the list it belongs. A great read, my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thank you, Damian;))

This certainly seems to capture the emotional intensity that comes with having a muse!

Thank you, Mr. Karswell;))

I love the metaphors. This piece is passionate and beautiful.

Thank you, Pinkdreams;))

Beautifully written Fia ♥️

Thank you, Pete;))

👏 👏 👏 immaculately incredible 👏 excellent musing queen 👸 👏 words can't begin to describe such a muse for own personal use truly exquisite!!

Please 🙏 keep on writing ✍ ok 👌 peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖 shalom

Thank you, Rich;))

I enjoyed this read, Fia. It came off as something different when I read it a second time. Lively words. Nicely done:)

Thank you, Moon_bather ;))

So dreamy, Fia! I fear I might need that umbrella after all, if just to block out the dazzle here, lol. Great vibe, great energy. Sometimes words just cannot convey adequately; you are correct. 😎☂️

Thank you, Billy, that is sweet of you to say;))

Your writing does what good poetry is supposed to do: it makes me feel every single word with all of my heart. Awesome work, Fia!

Thank you so much. I am still learning and reading everyone to improve.