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Trust
It's dark
The room lit by one candle
TRUST
Guided into the center
Nerves are firing
Hot breath on neck
Wet tongue on earlobe
TRUST
Eyes fighting control
Hands cupping and squeezing
Intensified press
TRUST
Buttons undone
One by one by one
Fabric pulled down, revealing
TRUST
Hand slides down
Enters thong
Caress trimmed hair
OPEN
Legs parted
Thick fingers enter
Thumb locked on clit
FUCK
WET
SQUEEZE
MORE
The room lit by one candle
TRUST
Guided into the center
Nerves are firing
Hot breath on neck
Wet tongue on earlobe
TRUST
Eyes fighting control
Hands cupping and squeezing
Intensified press
TRUST
Buttons undone
One by one by one
Fabric pulled down, revealing
TRUST
Hand slides down
Enters thong
Caress trimmed hair
OPEN
Legs parted
Thick fingers enter
Thumb locked on clit
FUCK
WET
SQUEEZE
MORE
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Re. Trust
16th Feb 2025 1:45am
That's...very direct and explicit. It's focused on the physical sensations and the building intensity of a sexual encounter. The repetition of 'TRUST' adds a layer of vulnerability and risk.
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16th Feb 2025 2:00am
Thank you for commenting; in that moment, there should be some trust, don't you think? MrBlack
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16th Feb 2025 2:39am
I need a cigarette now. Seductively penned, Fia. It's all about, Trust. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
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16th Feb 2025 12:22pm
Builds the intensity. I can imagine this being the thoughts of a woman ushered into the bedroom by an amourous man for the first time.
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