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My Vision of Love & Peace
A peaceful world is not what I see,
death, lies & murder, I just want to flee
when I see you though, all those thoughts disappear
you make my world complete; I love you my dear
Happy Valentines Day to you & many many more
peace on earth, no more corruption, lets end all wars.
death, lies & murder, I just want to flee
when I see you though, all those thoughts disappear
you make my world complete; I love you my dear
Happy Valentines Day to you & many many more
peace on earth, no more corruption, lets end all wars.
Published 13th Feb 2025
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13th Feb 2025 9:46pm
Beautifully delicate love .. with a message against the warring evils .. nicely done Keith sx
14th Feb 2025 00:14am
13th Feb 2025 10:12pm
Beautifully penned, Keith. What a wonderful message, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
14th Feb 2025 00:14am
14th Feb 2025 1:57am
How wonderful to have someone who makes the horrors of the world disappear. Beautiful poem.
14th Feb 2025 10:47am
14th Feb 2025 6:08am
14th Feb 2025 10:48am
Good to see you again commenting Kil_Ahn. Thank you. Happy Valentines Day to you as well.
14th Feb 2025 1:03pm
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14th Feb 2025 4:31pm
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What a lovely poem! It holds so much truth. When you give love to somebody, your heart cracks wide open and there is no more room for negative emotions. This is not only true concerning relationships, but also when you perform little acts of loving kindness to other people. Love and hatred simply cannot coexist. Love could be a first step towards peace in the world!
What a lovely poem! It holds so much truth. When you give love to somebody, your heart cracks wide open and there is no more room for negative emotions. This is not only true concerning relationships, but also when you perform little acts of loving kindness to other people. Love and hatred simply cannot coexist. Love could be a first step towards peace in the world!
14th Feb 2025 7:17pm
Love is the 1st step. I agree. Problem is many don't feel that love. Greed is a serious issue on our planet. Thank you Sappho. I appreciate you!!!
