Drink me, kill me... (with Reading)

I can see this being read in a group reading believe it or not. Very intense vibe here but good.

Wow, a group reading, that's interesting. :) Yes, I had hoped I could capture some of the intensity because there is a lot in between the lines. But anyway, I am glad you felt a very intense vibe and I really appreciate you sharing your thoughts. I am still always reluctant to post readings damnit... :p

Go girl that was just fantastic
The reading smashed it out the ball park
Easily one of your best
Love and light
Hugs n stuff
Ron xx

You always know how to make me smile Ron. I love that you thought it was fantastic and it's been a long time since I heard "smashed it out of the park". ;) I always doubt myself on these so your feedback means a lot to me. I am waiting for some good Southern accent jokes. lol So many hugs and stuff back at ya.

You sound like my favourite person on TRUE BLOOD her name was Pamela lol a southern queen
Ron x

Hell yeah, I love True Blood... Vampires, sex, and the deep south... What's not to love!!!
I am beginning to think you've got a thing for American Southern accents Ron. Just like you should damnit. ;) X

Busted, guilty has charged lol
Love and light
Ron x

Oh, you are so guilty as charged... I see it all over your face... lol

It all makes sense now but I'll be damned if I can explain it.  We here in the Underground have your back.  
That's all you need to know

BIG

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Now I want you to explain it damnit... "have your back" oh God, so many in the underground want to have my back in different ways but I am not going to talk about that. :p I suppose that is all I need to know. lol But still I always want to know more.

Maybe I’ll explain one day ..

I like that you can read this different ways. Maybe it's just my state of mind, but I think it's about killing pain through sex. Or maybe that's just thinking too deeply into it haha.

Great ink, friend 😁

Oh you can't think too deeply into it DC. My writing almost always has deeper meanings. Killing pain through sex is definitely prevalent... Causing pain through sex is another...  Ironically our deepest desires and fantasies can be unleashed in the most traumatic ways.

This was so intense. I got this feeling of fear and reminiscense. It says things about the innocence of  young women and the failures of nasty men.
And horror, like a film, I could hear this as a monologue read over a motion picture.
Kind Regards
James

Hey James, it's been so long. There is definitely fear and reminiscense so as usual you pick up on things very well. Innocence is so fragile, and so easily taken. Often making the innocent turn into the most incredibly depraved masochists' with needs that can never be filled. A monologue over a motion picture, I love that. ;)

I want to say you use BDSM as a frame to delve into something much deeper here.
I don't like erotica for erotica sake.
But this piece is so much more than that. There are many deeper facets to this.
Not to mention it is terrifying.
Sincere regards
James

Thank you James, for seeing the depth and taking time to share your thoughts with me. I really appreciate it so much.

Love the voice 🌼

Well you are a Southern boy aren't you? ;) But I adore that you love my voice... That makes me so happy. But still I would expect a Southern joke from you AJ. lol

No jokes, just happy, and thanks again for the reading 🌼

Yes, you truly understand Mary. It is ironic how something so traumatic and painful can create such an intense need. Trying to reclaim innocence in order to feel the extreme of having it taken roughly again and again. When your life becomes someone's darkest and most depraved fantasy, there is no coming back from that. I could say so much more but I will leave it at that because I know you understand all to well. I cannot imagine anything creating a stronger addiction. Always desperately needing, searching...

This poem expresses intense emotions.  

The imagery is vivid and evocative, with phrases like "Cut my skin with a razor," "My soul is polluted by a sadistic fantasy," and "Drink me, kill me" creating a sense of visceral intensity.

Intense emotions, intense feelings... yes...

I am glad you join me and feel the vivid and evocative imagery. There is a visceral intensity that is created when we experience certain things. And that intensity becomes the strongest need... forever.

This makes me wish I had a cape, superpowers, and I was out hunting Evil and protecting "innocence".

Can't return innocence. Like putting a genie back in a bottle.  I offer another mentor like hug for you, Little Kx.  I’ll put another towel on my shoulder if you need to a cry a bit. Be well my young friend. You are a survivor.

Thanks DaVinci. I can see you as a super hero...

Indeed, innocence can never be returned. I was forced to grow up really fast after being moved to another country very young and what followed. It was a very complicated and terrifying time for me and it really left the deepest scars which have shaped so many things in my life. But anyway, I really love and appreciate the mentor like hug.

Scary and erotic, or what I call, horrotica (patent pending). It's the fine line that breaks between pleasure and pain.
Strong piece K.

Horrotica, I love it... that's perfect. I will have to use that. I am no stranger to blurred lines... especially between pleasure and pain. Two of the most intense things you can ever feel. So often pain becomes pleasure and pleasure becomes pain. A lesson I learned very early.

Loved it

Hey Crimsonofpassion... It's really nice to meet you. I am so glad you loved it. I know my writing isn't for everyone and I always appreciate when someone gets me so much. Thank you.

Keep writing ❤️👍

That's seriously dark and disturbing. It's got that unsettling, almost detached feeling, like a Michael Myers vibe, where the violence and vulnerability are chillingly close. The 'drink me, kill me' ending is a real gut punch... Truly love the vibe though..

Dark and disturbing is something I know from a very young age and often it finds it's way into my writing. Sometimes you have to detach, you have to compartmentalize, you have to split yourself. You become addicted to the very things that started as horrors. So addicted and they seek you out so easily, again and again. A gift from the Devil... I really appreciate you coming by and I love that you love the vibe. Thanks for stopping by and sharing your thoughts with me, I love that.

Powerfully penned, Kristina. Very dark undertones, add ambiance. Great read & listen, my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian  

Hey Damien, yes there are definitely dark undertones and overtones too. So glad you enjoyed the read, that makes me happy. I am currently traveling so I am sorry for the delay responding. It's been a crazy trip so far.