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Sugar Baby
I know what you need...
A young naughty, dirty little slut.
Becoming your obsession
So you can't live in peace.
As you endlessly rush...
Between ecstasy and suffering
I just want you to play with me
But you get so hooked, addicted
You need to dominate and control me
I will be your doll
That you'll have in every position
I will be your parasite
Sucking out your cum and blood
I will be your toy
That you always have to play with
I will be your problem
Which creates even bigger problems
I will be the cause of your madness
Your sleepless nights
I will say "I will always be only yours"
But tomorrow I will be nobody's again
I will be your dirty little girl
Feeding your ego at your expense
Playing every game you want, unfairly
My brattiness making you punish me
My submission making you punish me harder
But who is really breaking Daddy?
A young naughty, dirty little slut.
Becoming your obsession
So you can't live in peace.
As you endlessly rush...
Between ecstasy and suffering
I just want you to play with me
But you get so hooked, addicted
You need to dominate and control me
I will be your doll
That you'll have in every position
I will be your parasite
Sucking out your cum and blood
I will be your toy
That you always have to play with
I will be your problem
Which creates even bigger problems
I will be the cause of your madness
Your sleepless nights
I will say "I will always be only yours"
But tomorrow I will be nobody's again
I will be your dirty little girl
Feeding your ego at your expense
Playing every game you want, unfairly
My brattiness making you punish me
My submission making you punish me harder
But who is really breaking Daddy?
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27th Jan 2025 2:44pm
Hey Pink! I do love it hot! ;) Thanks so much for stopping by and sharing your thoughts.
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28th Jan 2025 6:27pm
Damnit, how do I respond to that... I love it! What kind of gem am I though? :p
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28th Jan 2025 9:49pm
To pick the right man not the wrong kind of man that you want to be apart of your own life for remember no one is sent to you by chance or accident 😔🤔 for you have to chose that what you want and need not what you don't need or want in your life and love and devotion of your own dreams 🙏📿🪷🪬 SHAMAN 🪬
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27th Jan 2025 2:39pm
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27th Jan 2025 2:45pm
Hey Daniel, so happy you enjoyed it! I am just trying to keep it very hot in here. ;)
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27th Jan 2025 2:54pm
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27th Jan 2025 8:32pm
Wow, this is a diabolical Super Storm of grabbing for the brass ring ...
DADDY might be breaking but rest assured he won't be going down without a fight !
BIG, BLOODY and Magnificent..
DADDY might be breaking but rest assured he won't be going down without a fight !
BIG, BLOODY and Magnificent..
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28th Jan 2025 6:14pm
Oh I know Daddy always puts up a fight and tries to break me. What could be more fun than punishing a bratty nubile young little slut and making her beg for it. Beg so you have no choice.. you know who is control... getting my ass spanked so hard while you pull my hair and try to hurt me with your cock... deeper...
Re. Sugar Baby
27th Jan 2025 8:49pm
Hahaha, the pimp's pimper. Under estimating each other deserves it's very own category when it comes to a relationship. We love the confidence that you have in yourself and your ability to always bein control. We never under estimate an opponent there's usually more than sex on the line. Tight
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Re: Re. Sugar Baby
28th Jan 2025 6:16pm
Haha, Oh my God! it sure does deserve it's own category. There is always more than sex on the line if it's truly a good arrangement where you are trying to break me... In every way possible, body, mind, soul... How hard will you try? Can you go the distance? Beyond your boundaries to try and search for mine...
Re. Sugar Baby
30th Jan 2025 8:35pm
It's really cool that you used your own picture in this posting...
I can understand how you'd fuck up my head if I lived in your desire cage.
Wait
What am I saying ?
See you already got to me
I can understand how you'd fuck up my head if I lived in your desire cage.
Wait
What am I saying ?
See you already got to me
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31st Jan 2025 1:22pm
Haha. :p
Oh my God, I am so good at fucking up peoples heads. I guess it's because I am so fucked up myself. I suppose I was just trying to capture a power dynamic more so with an older man. Often they are more attentive, better in bed, have the ability to take you to nice places and buy you things, more thoughtful, and have cool experiences to share. But like I find with all men I suppose, they get addicted to the attention and sex; then it can turn from fun to something else really fast.
Oh my God, I am so good at fucking up peoples heads. I guess it's because I am so fucked up myself. I suppose I was just trying to capture a power dynamic more so with an older man. Often they are more attentive, better in bed, have the ability to take you to nice places and buy you things, more thoughtful, and have cool experiences to share. But like I find with all men I suppose, they get addicted to the attention and sex; then it can turn from fun to something else really fast.
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2nd Feb 2025 7:08pm
"Between ecstasy and suffering", "I will be the cause of your madness"
It's lines like these that truly show the depth of understanding the relationship between two. Yes, it's obsessive, hot and titillating and you've captured it here perfectly.
It's lines like these that truly show the depth of understanding the relationship between two. Yes, it's obsessive, hot and titillating and you've captured it here perfectly.
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3rd Feb 2025 1:44am
I always love the lines you choose, you can feel me so well Wally. It's an interesting and different relationship with older men for a younger girl. So much can be said on that subject... I think I will keep my mouth shut. lol
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3rd Feb 2025 1:22am
Haha, Holy Macaroni huh? I am trying to figure out how to interpret that exactly but it just sounds so damn cute... lol I like it a lot I haven't seen you around these parts before... you must be new... Welcome! I am sure I can corrupt you. :p
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3rd Feb 2025 1:26am
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3rd Feb 2025 1:45am
Wow, you really are new then... I hope you enjoy yourself... I think you will.
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3rd Feb 2025 10:43am
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3rd Feb 2025 12:20pm
Trome! you didn't forget me! :) Oh I will check it out right away. I love NEW EROTIC POEMS. And you know I wouldn't leave you high and dry... ;)
Re. Sugar Baby
10th Feb 2025 11:18pm
Punished with pleasure can be a great payback! Who will be more satisfied, Sugar baby or Daddy? Very sexy write (and photo!)
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11th Feb 2025 00:49am
Oh yes! it can be so intense. I love to be punished because I am such a brat sometimes. Maybe I want him to prove he is worthy of my submission. ;) Oh by making him the most satisfied man ever, I will definitely be the one who is more satisfied...
Re. Sugar Baby
25th Feb 2025 3:44am
Seductively penned, Kristina. Into the list it belongs. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
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Re: Re. Sugar Baby
25th Feb 2025 11:34am
Hey there Damian. Its so nice to see you again. They tell me seduction is my middle name. ;p gets me in so much trouble though. I am so happy to find a way onto your list. I appreciate you right back. ;)