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Birdwatching
While scanning for tits
I saw only wrens.
I counted 24 wrens...
and they were very naughty.
I had a bad case of the wrens.
I saw only wrens.
I counted 24 wrens...
and they were very naughty.
I had a bad case of the wrens.
Published 19th Jan 2025
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19th Jan 2025 4:57am
While scanning for tits...
Great opening line. Sort of not getting the part about the 24 wrens though.
Great opening line. Sort of not getting the part about the 24 wrens though.
19th Jan 2025 6:38am
Well in beer terms 12 beers is a half rack, or half case, and so 24 for a whole case... good or bad...as the case may be 😜
19th Jan 2025 5:03am
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21st Jan 2025 00:40am
Dear MS,
Yep, you got me. I had a good giggle with this fun and clever write. H🌷
Yep, you got me. I had a good giggle with this fun and clever write. H🌷
21st Jan 2025 00:47am
Those little birds are really amazing.
They love to hide out in the rose bush stems.
They love to hide out in the rose bush stems.
26th Jan 2025 5:53pm
Like Ahavati said, it reminds me of my high school English teacher saying "you must grab your reader's attention" in those opening lines.
Nice one MS
Nice one MS
26th Jan 2025 6:03pm
Craig Ferguson used to giggle about that word every now and then on his old talk show.
Damn, he's a funny ole Scotsman:)
Damn, he's a funny ole Scotsman:)
