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My live storie
Im heere two tel u that u ned too stay in skol
I am proof that if yo do't go to skool yo'l end up like me
i dropes out of the 1st grad becuse my teecher give me bad grades & homwork
I left home
I wind up on the stret
dope and alchol fuked my brain by 9
I can't wread & rite two wel
was shot n tha arm and legg thre times
Mum and pops disoned me
I found jeebus, satan and PAR one day
They puled me from the guter
they tawt me how to be a nice, kind man
They said sun, u ned to write your storie
They dircted me to DUP
Now i right storyies and pottery for DUP
This is my biographie
Mayebe somone wil buy it for milions of bucs
I like to dream big...
I am proof that if yo do't go to skool yo'l end up like me
i dropes out of the 1st grad becuse my teecher give me bad grades & homwork
I left home
I wind up on the stret
dope and alchol fuked my brain by 9
I can't wread & rite two wel
was shot n tha arm and legg thre times
Mum and pops disoned me
I found jeebus, satan and PAR one day
They puled me from the guter
they tawt me how to be a nice, kind man
They said sun, u ned to write your storie
They dircted me to DUP
Now i right storyies and pottery for DUP
This is my biographie
Mayebe somone wil buy it for milions of bucs
I like to dream big...
Published 12th Jan 2025
Author's Note
Specil thanx goes two PAR. PAR u inflewance me with your peom "Glitch".
Muito obrigado a você, meu grande amigo. Você é um talento incrível aqui no DUP!
Muito obrigado a você, meu grande amigo. Você é um talento incrível aqui no DUP!
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12th Jan 2025 8:03pm
12th Jan 2025 8:05pm
Yesterday 3:03am
You just need a hot girl next to you while you play guitar, then you'll be rich
Yesterday 10:22am
Yesterday 1:59pm
Yesterday 2:02pm
The influence from your poem "Glitch" made me think of this mastershit!
It was a piece that I wanted to dedicate you on. Realizing now, how it could've been so much better, I'm sorry to compare your awesome poem to this pile of junk. Thanks anyway PAR.
It was a piece that I wanted to dedicate you on. Realizing now, how it could've been so much better, I'm sorry to compare your awesome poem to this pile of junk. Thanks anyway PAR.
Yesterday 2:05pm
Don't say that... you wrote no pile of junk... you did a very well told story out of many words in a pile.
Yesterday 2:09pm
Alright. I'll accept that. Thanks man for the positive feedback and great friend you are.
