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Blow Out The Candles
As birthdays go
This is one is not so bad
A smile on my face
My health
My family
New friends
New ventures etc...
There are thoughts hidden
behind the smile
Like it's cold outside
are people warm?
Do they have food?
There is a fire raging.
How are they?
There are wars all over
outside and internally
Will we make it as a people?
Blowing out these candles
I smile and feel the tracks of tears
of both joy and grief
I made a wish
Now, if this one comes true
we will all be....safe
This is one is not so bad
A smile on my face
My health
My family
New friends
New ventures etc...
There are thoughts hidden
behind the smile
Like it's cold outside
are people warm?
Do they have food?
There is a fire raging.
How are they?
There are wars all over
outside and internally
Will we make it as a people?
Blowing out these candles
I smile and feel the tracks of tears
of both joy and grief
I made a wish
Now, if this one comes true
we will all be....safe
Author's Note
I watched the news. Today of all days. I do not talk of these things because they take me to a dark place.
Anyhow I wish you all a safe, warm and blessed day. Fia xoxo
Anyhow I wish you all a safe, warm and blessed day. Fia xoxo
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8th Jan 2025 1:22pm
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8th Jan 2025 1:41pm
Happy Birthday. Have you been spanked yet? The news is terrible. It kept me up all night. The fires. Those poor people.
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Anonymous
9th Jan 2025 2:29am
Happy birthday, Fia. Beautiful poem. I love your wish. Wish it could come true for you, and all of us.
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9th Jan 2025 2:52am
Happy Birthday, Fia. Powerful write, my friend. Into the list it belongs. Hope your wish comes true. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
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9th Jan 2025 2:53am
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9th Jan 2025 11:34am
Happy Birthday!!! Not always easy to navigate the joy and grief as pointed out in this pensive write. Have a lovely day!
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9th Jan 2025 11:39pm
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9th Jan 2025 11:35am
On special days it's hard to not think about the ones who live in horrible conditions :-(
Amazing piece, dear Fia, and a happy belated birthday 💕
Amazing piece, dear Fia, and a happy belated birthday 💕
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9th Jan 2025 11:34pm
Love the picture and the words. It all captures the paradoxical nature of a day that is supposed to be happy when there are things going on in other places that are downright terrible.
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12th Jan 2025 2:43am
Happy belated birthday, Fia. I hope you've stayed warm too. The way you thought of others less fortunate on your special day was really nice.
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12th Jan 2025 2:45am