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Another stupid poem
I miss you
I wish you never left me
Sadness follows me
A new year, with the same old sorrows
Screw this!
I'm too old for this shit
My feelings and this poem were pathetic
I'm gonna blast some Deicide, cook some burgers and later on watch some Stallone, Schwarzenegger or Lundgren films
By tomorrow morning, she'll be a distant memory.
I wish you never left me
Sadness follows me
A new year, with the same old sorrows
Screw this!
I'm too old for this shit
My feelings and this poem were pathetic
I'm gonna blast some Deicide, cook some burgers and later on watch some Stallone, Schwarzenegger or Lundgren films
By tomorrow morning, she'll be a distant memory.
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Re. Another stupid poem
1st Jan 2025 11:28pm
this is really good poem dearest Keith and your feelings are valid if I may make a suggestion on movies I would say How to be single on net flix... it's a really good movie about bonding ❤️
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1st Jan 2025 11:31pm
Thanks Brenda. I should have put in the suggested themes "fiction". This was just something I made up. I'm not actually going through a breakup. Appreciate the feedback!
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1st Jan 2025 11:32pm
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1st Jan 2025 11:33pm
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1st Jan 2025 11:39pm
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1st Jan 2025 11:43pm
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2nd Jan 2025 3:06am
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2nd Jan 2025 12:12pm
Re. Another stupid poem
2nd Jan 2025 3:30am
My comment would be immaculately disgraceful.
Hint: sun don't shine location, NO LUBE
LIKE
Hint: sun don't shine location, NO LUBE
LIKE
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2nd Jan 2025 12:13pm
Re. Another stupid poem
2nd Jan 2025 5:29am
Sometimes you gotta eat some burgers and watch a good movie. Phenomenal write, Keith. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
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2nd Jan 2025 12:13pm
Re. Another stupid poem
2nd Jan 2025 9:55am
Dear K,
Fiction or non-fiction you capture those moments of missing someone to moving on in an entertaining and delicious manner. I’d really like my burger well done and with cheese please. And I thought Arnold was hilarious and silly in Twins. 🤭
H🌷
Fiction or non-fiction you capture those moments of missing someone to moving on in an entertaining and delicious manner. I’d really like my burger well done and with cheese please. And I thought Arnold was hilarious and silly in Twins. 🤭
H🌷
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2nd Jan 2025 12:14pm