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One Liner...No 1
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One Liner...No 1
When you're swimming against the tide nobody can see your tears.
Written by
backdeckbenny
Published
6th Dec 2024
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Author's Note
I swim laps and this came into my head.
Yes I know it's two lines.
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Re. One Liner...No 1
dartford
(Paul S...)
7th Dec 2024 00:09am
it isn’t the number of lines that matters, mate,
it’s the thought
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Re. One Liner...No 1
crimsin
(Unveiling)
7th Dec 2024 00:40am
hi dearest Benny good evening I'm sorry you're sad but this is really good 💕
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Re. One Liner...No 1
backdeckbenny
7th Dec 2024 1:31am
Thanks crimson.
It's just a thought that came to mind.
Not sad just pondering.
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Re. One Liner...No 1
seekingkate
(kateA)
9th Dec 2024 8:32pm
I use to swim laps and the words that flowed with the strokes were at times amazing. I like how you put your words together.
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Re: Re. One Liner...No 1
backdeckbenny
9th Dec 2024 11:12pm
Thank you and you're right about doing laps....you think about thinking without actually thinking about thinking....lol
Don't you think.
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Re: Re. One Liner...No 1
seekingkate
(kateA)
10th Dec 2024 3:33am
Yep!
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