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My only wish
...
And if my life should end tomorrow
and I sink into dust and dirt,
My only wish is that you'd know
I never meant to make you hurt.
If I could make the time go backwards
If granting wishes was my skill,
I'd put together what has fractured
and we'd laugh together still.
.
And if my life should end tomorrow
and I sink into dust and dirt,
My only wish is that you'd know
I never meant to make you hurt.
If I could make the time go backwards
If granting wishes was my skill,
I'd put together what has fractured
and we'd laugh together still.
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Author's Note
No idea when I wrote this, just found it on a scrap of paper...
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Re. My only wish
3rd Dec 2024 00:17am
Dear K,
Really? You know what I’d find on a scrap of paper? Nothing like this!!!!
This made me catch my breath. I loved the confession, and forgiveness and the laughter afterward…the best healing balm. Lovely piece. H🌷
Really? You know what I’d find on a scrap of paper? Nothing like this!!!!
This made me catch my breath. I loved the confession, and forgiveness and the laughter afterward…the best healing balm. Lovely piece. H🌷
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Re: Re. My only wish
3rd Dec 2024 00:38am
Thank you so much! (I just hope the words are actually mine, and I didn't just scribble down something I heard or read somewhere else...)
Pretty sure I know what it's about, I just don't recall writing it. 🤷♀️
❤️k
Pretty sure I know what it's about, I just don't recall writing it. 🤷♀️
❤️k
Re. My only wish
3rd Dec 2024 1:01am
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5th Dec 2024 00:40am
Re. My only wish
3rd Dec 2024 1:44am
You are quite tender Red
You act tough but you sure do write with mercy …
BIG
You act tough but you sure do write with mercy …
BIG
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Re: Re. My only wish
5th Dec 2024 00:41am
Re. My only wish
7th Dec 2024 6:15pm
Beautiful words broken. It almost feels like the closing lyrics to a song, heartfelt and profound.
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Re: Re. My only wish
8th Dec 2024 1:34am
It does seem like an ending to something... I can't remember why or when I wrote it!
Thanks for reading
❤️k
Thanks for reading
❤️k
Re. My only wish
10th Dec 2024 3:56pm
Re: Re. My only wish
10th Dec 2024 4:01pm
Re. My only wish
14th Dec 2024 4:42am
Beautiful write, K. Has a lyrical flavor, I like this a lot. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
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Re: Re. My only wish
14th Dec 2024 11:36am
Thank you! I don't recall when I wrote it, but I'm wondering if it might become part of a song someday...
❤️k
❤️k
Re. My only wish
13th Jan 2025 5:42pm
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