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Can I Kiss You?
Can I kiss you?
It's only because I’m curious.
My mind's entranced by the way
you move your lips.
Can I kiss you, please?
It will be quick to quench my need.
Once it happens, you do not have to...
Can I kiss you now?!
My tongue wants to play with yours.
Say no, and I will ask no more.
That's a lie...
Say no and I will triple my efforts!
Can we kiss each other?
Last night I dreamt of you and how it would be.
You moved in slowly as I held my breath.
I was like a child receiving a gift,
The anticipation bursting -
Then you said,
I always wanted to know how soft your lips were.
Gently, you placed them on mine.
I felt the race of your heart on the palm of my hand.
Venturing more exploratory,
You traced your tongue across my mind -
Parting it, allowing access.
Worshiping how heavenly you sucked my top lip,
I sucked lower -
Revelling in the sweet taste of wine and each other.
Sliding back on the couch, you followed,
Delving deeper, taking your time.
Moaning into your mouth from this slow kiss,
Naturally I wanted more!
Yet, tonight was not about the speed,
Or the urgency...
It was about the moment -
The sharing and intermingling of passion.
It's only because I’m curious.
My mind's entranced by the way
you move your lips.
Can I kiss you, please?
It will be quick to quench my need.
Once it happens, you do not have to...
Can I kiss you now?!
My tongue wants to play with yours.
Say no, and I will ask no more.
That's a lie...
Say no and I will triple my efforts!
Can we kiss each other?
Last night I dreamt of you and how it would be.
You moved in slowly as I held my breath.
I was like a child receiving a gift,
The anticipation bursting -
Then you said,
I always wanted to know how soft your lips were.
Gently, you placed them on mine.
I felt the race of your heart on the palm of my hand.
Venturing more exploratory,
You traced your tongue across my mind -
Parting it, allowing access.
Worshiping how heavenly you sucked my top lip,
I sucked lower -
Revelling in the sweet taste of wine and each other.
Sliding back on the couch, you followed,
Delving deeper, taking your time.
Moaning into your mouth from this slow kiss,
Naturally I wanted more!
Yet, tonight was not about the speed,
Or the urgency...
It was about the moment -
The sharing and intermingling of passion.
Author's Note
Continues in December 2024.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. Can I Kiss You?
22nd Nov 2024 3:04pm
Sensual poem about kissing. Well said and always a joy to read your writes. A kiss for you xxx
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Re. Can I Kiss You?
23rd Nov 2024 1:36am
Sexy write, Fia. Into the list it belongs. Think I need a cigarette. lol. Appreciate you.
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23rd Nov 2024 1:55am
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23rd Nov 2024 1:28pm
It certainly inspires one to willing partake in that kiss. Lovely write!
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23rd Nov 2024 4:02pm
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23rd Nov 2024 3:14pm
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23rd Nov 2024 4:03pm
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23rd Nov 2024 8:59pm
I like the creativity and visceral-ness on display here, how the narrative exists inside a moment.
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23rd Nov 2024 9:38pm
Re. Can I Kiss You?
24th Nov 2024 00:17am
Provocative, and alluring... Not generally my lane but appreciate your skill of grabbing and taunting the reader,
Intriguing genre...
Regards,
BITS
Intriguing genre...
Regards,
BITS
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24th Nov 2024 9:38pm
Well I have this Fiaberry flavor v-ChapStick I need to try out. Kiss those lips. xxx
Re. Can I Kiss You?
26th Nov 2024 3:10am
This is a beautiful poem. It stimulates the mind with a sense of anticipation. It makes one wonder what will come next. My favorite lines: " You traced your tongue across my mind -
Parting it, allowing access.
Parting it, allowing access.
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26th Nov 2024 3:16am