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A Hefty Fee
Reality always strikes between the eyes
Leaving it’s mark on the human psyche
Madness will cut everyone down to size
Life’s taxed even death costs a hefty fee
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2024
Leaving it’s mark on the human psyche
Madness will cut everyone down to size
Life’s taxed even death costs a hefty fee
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2024
Written by
DamianDeadLove
(Damian DeadLove)
Published 22nd Nov 2024
Author's Note
Late night musing. Everything in this life is a racket, even death. Our families still have to flip the bill, you talk about harsh reality. Appreciate you.
- Damian DeadLove
" I had no idea what it'd cost
My life passed before my eyes
When I found out how little I accomplished
All my plans denied."
- Dave Mustaine
- Damian DeadLove
" I had no idea what it'd cost
My life passed before my eyes
When I found out how little I accomplished
All my plans denied."
- Dave Mustaine
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Re. A Hefty Fee
22nd Nov 2024 6:47am
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23rd Nov 2024 2:14am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Jimmy. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
Re. A Hefty Fee
22nd Nov 2024 7:43am
Very sobering, real, and true. Death is something, as a whole, that most of mankind will experience, and it sure does "cost" a lot, heh. Not just the literal expenses from a funeral and all, but like, the "toll" on relatives and family and friends. It seems as though we're condemned to lost damnation, over time, as we all die alone, individually. You are here, you die, and 300 years later, no one remembers the "proper" you. To me, this kind of "hits home", at least it should, in how I act, and in my "frontal lobe", heh. Great reminder to live for today and tomorrow, and for me personally, some faithful assurances to hope for. Thanks for sharing.
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Re: Re. A Hefty Fee
23rd Nov 2024 2:18am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, brother. Glad you connected to the write. I agree with your analysis. It is sad that a family that's mourning also has to deal with the financial burden as well. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
Re. A Hefty Fee
22nd Nov 2024 8:30am
Re: Re. A Hefty Fee
23rd Nov 2024 2:19am
Thanks for reading and your kind words, LDF. Honored to make your RL. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
Re. A Hefty Fee
22nd Nov 2024 9:00am
So true Damian, George Harrison's 'Taxman' always springs to mind and is still relevant today... having done a couple myself, funerals are so bloody expensive! ♥️
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Re: Re. A Hefty Fee
23rd Nov 2024 2:22am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Pete. Great song, brother. That would have been some lyrics to quote in my notes. I agree with you totally, brother. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
Re. A Hefty Fee
22nd Nov 2024 11:16am
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23rd Nov 2024 2:23am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. Glad you liked the ink. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
Re: Re. A Hefty Fee
23rd Nov 2024 2:25am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tams. Honored to make your RL. They do seem to go hand in hand. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
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Re: Re. A Hefty Fee
23rd Nov 2024 2:29am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. Everything has a bottom line and a profit margin for sure. Price gouging is a huge part of that as well. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
Re. A Hefty Fee
22nd Nov 2024 7:00pm
I would have to agree with that statement 😉 every where you turn it's always a gimmick to just walk away from the negativity 🤨🪬 SHAMAN 🪬
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Re: Re. A Hefty Fee
23rd Nov 2024 2:32am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, SHAMAN. Glad you connected to the write. Much respect, brother poet. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
Re: Re. A Hefty Fee
23rd Nov 2024 3:54am
Respect Brother Poet ✍️🪬 SHAMAN 🪬 for sure we have to learn to walk away from the negativity of those who, only see the glass half full yet they chose to draw you in there nonsense that does nothing for your life ✍️🪬 SHAMAN 🪬
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Re. A Hefty Fee
22nd Nov 2024 7:18pm
Dear DL,
This is more relevant for me than you’ll ever know. Excellent insight and excellently crafted. H🌷
This is more relevant for me than you’ll ever know. Excellent insight and excellently crafted. H🌷
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Re: Re. A Hefty Fee
23rd Nov 2024 2:34am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, H. Glad you connected to the write. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
Re. A Hefty Fee
22nd Nov 2024 11:12pm
Re: Re. A Hefty Fee
23rd Nov 2024 2:35am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. Unfortunately that is the truth. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
Re. A Hefty Fee
25th Nov 2024 7:19am
Yep. Money money money. And again, with the "other countries" thing. It's sad that other countries again take care of their citizens with free healthcare, etc. while here in America medical care is about cold business and as you point out here as well, death even. Sick.
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Re: Re. A Hefty Fee
25th Nov 2024 9:47am
Thanks so much for reading and your commentary, Michael. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
Re. A Hefty Fee
4th Dec 2024 4:08am
Nice piece here, Damian. I especially appreciate the line,
'Madness will cut everyone down to size'. Ain't that the truth? Enough said.
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Re: Re. A Hefty Fee
4th Dec 2024 4:21am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Moon. It's very true, unfortunately. I liked that line as well. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian