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An Arrow Straight to You
I would hope that you could read through my lines
and my words spoken intently to you.
I think that you can
and I think that you know the depths
at which the wind blows
my love straight to you.
Those lines were a tribute to you
only you.
When will you see
what you mean to me?
it isn't as difficult
as you try to make it.
It is the heart and soul of a woman
directed at you with cupid's arrow.
The arrow has been shot.
It has hit its mark.
Did you feel it in the wind?
and my words spoken intently to you.
I think that you can
and I think that you know the depths
at which the wind blows
my love straight to you.
Those lines were a tribute to you
only you.
When will you see
what you mean to me?
it isn't as difficult
as you try to make it.
It is the heart and soul of a woman
directed at you with cupid's arrow.
The arrow has been shot.
It has hit its mark.
Did you feel it in the wind?
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Re: An Arrow Straight to You
19th May 2012 2:06am
Whit woo, look at you, sending an arrow you hope to be true. Your face on the screen, a red-headed dream, I pray that your lover will get what you mean. Now I've seen the face that's so full of grace, a new friend that I'd like to embrace. Purely platonic, you've been such a tonic,helping a soul that is still embryonic.
I loved hearing it read aloud fcxx, it was so much more personal, really making the words come alive. Is this the future? A true tribute to your muse and I hope that your arrow has found its mark.
Thank you for sharing the write and the cool clip.
My love and eternal gratitude to you, sweet Lady.
D xx
I loved hearing it read aloud fcxx, it was so much more personal, really making the words come alive. Is this the future? A true tribute to your muse and I hope that your arrow has found its mark.
Thank you for sharing the write and the cool clip.
My love and eternal gratitude to you, sweet Lady.
D xx
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re: Re: An Arrow Straight to You
19th May 2012 2:37am
aww ty doll..truly I appreciate it..I don't know if he will ever understand actually..he is very unique and a bit private but i am certainly hoping he sees it..i did other spoken poems in the spoken word part..i like doing them some..you should try it! Ty again for the lovely review, Fcxx
Re: An Arrow Straight to You
Anonymous
19th May 2012 12:51pm
Hi, I enjoyed this write, the feel is different from so many of your others. I find this write to have an air of mystery as it seems written to someone new, yet old. Both having written the lines and just shot the arrow-Interesting and really great as always, peace, Miki
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19th May 2012 5:20pm
Re: An Arrow Straight to You
19th May 2012 5:02pm
this is stunningly beautiful as you are..I pray your arrow hit its mark lovely lady..peace Crim :)
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19th May 2012 5:20pm
Re: An Arrow Straight to You
Anonymous
21st May 2012 4:57pm
fcxx,
Straight shooting to you! I love how you gave passage to wind through out this one. Cool write!
tornado
Straight shooting to you! I love how you gave passage to wind through out this one. Cool write!
tornado
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Re: An Arrow Straight to You
14th Jun 2012 00:01am
Gotta love a soft southern voice dancing through the words of your heart. Hoping your aim for the heart finds its mark. :)
My 1st day here in this world of words and it feels like home.
My 1st day here in this world of words and it feels like home.
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