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juz thought
the rush
of the
unflowable water
and
the upheaval of
unspeakable emotions,,,
both are like curse...
of the
unflowable water
and
the upheaval of
unspeakable emotions,,,
both are like curse...
Author's Note
picture done by me... it's was a lovely Sunday evening
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Re. juz thought
21st Oct 2024 2:31pm
I love your photo and poem, dimpy. There a lot of heavy emotion there.
Well done.
Well done.
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21st Oct 2024 3:59pm
The unexpected flow of water....is that not like tears that fall unexpectedly? Your words and Sunday evening picture capture the feelings that can well up in the emotional aspects of life. Like nature, we can't always control what happens in the lake of our hearts, only endure it, and possibly carve out a new path forward that wasn't there before.
Well done, Dimpy.
Well done, Dimpy.
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Re. juz thought
21st Oct 2024 6:07pm
Unflowable (that is. cannot flow) water cannot rush, it would remain still and stagnate. Water that flows uncontrollably can rush and be a particular curse when it sweeps homes away in floods.
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Yesterday 3:39am
here a water has been imagined as if someone has grabbed it from the abyss. It will never be able to flow...
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Yesterday 3:09am
yeah artist this BLUE view sent waves through my body...and calmed my mind for some time...
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Dear D,
This write had me thinking there was beauty even when things and times seem immovable. Lovely write. H🌷
This write had me thinking there was beauty even when things and times seem immovable. Lovely write. H🌷
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