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juz thought
the rush
of the
unflowable water
and
the upheaval of
unspeakable emotions,,,
both are like curse...
of the
unflowable water
and
the upheaval of
unspeakable emotions,,,
both are like curse...
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picture done by me... it's was a lovely Sunday evening
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Re. juz thought
21st Oct 2024 2:31pm
I love your photo and poem, dimpy. There a lot of heavy emotion there.
Well done.
Well done.
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Re. juz thought
21st Oct 2024 6:07pm
Unflowable (that is. cannot flow) water cannot rush, it would remain still and stagnate. Water that flows uncontrollably can rush and be a particular curse when it sweeps homes away in floods.
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Re: Re. juz thought
22nd Oct 2024 3:39am
here a water has been imagined as if someone has grabbed it from the abyss. It will never be able to flow...
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21st Oct 2024 7:17pm
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22nd Oct 2024 3:09am
yeah artist this BLUE view sent waves through my body...and calmed my mind for some time...
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Re. juz thought
22nd Oct 2024 5:17am
Dear D,
This write had me thinking there was beauty even when things and times seem immovable. Lovely write. H🌷
This write had me thinking there was beauty even when things and times seem immovable. Lovely write. H🌷
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