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D's Poetry
about the writing
process in here
& how it goes
it usually starts
with music a pic
and concept or
favorite quote
words on paper
left to simmer for
a couple of days
at times weeks
adding pieces &
deleting bits next
is over and over
finetuning lines
it's a nightmare
a perfectionist to
the core the bar
is set high and
the control freak
doesn't make any
concessions to the
content, format & flow
process in here
& how it goes
it usually starts
with music a pic
and concept or
favorite quote
words on paper
left to simmer for
a couple of days
at times weeks
adding pieces &
deleting bits next
is over and over
finetuning lines
it's a nightmare
a perfectionist to
the core the bar
is set high and
the control freak
doesn't make any
concessions to the
content, format & flow
Published Yesterday
Author's Note
DM - Sweetest Perfection.
https://youtu.be/J50FF_mI39o
https://youtu.be/J50FF_mI39o
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reading list entries 6
comments 19
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Yesterday 2:04pm
Do you, girl. Do you. And post. Because every time I see you on my updates feed I know it’s going to be a good day.
Yesterday 3:00pm
I can't be anything but me :-) Thanks heaps for your comment & RL, you made my day 💕
Yesterday 7:03pm
Continue to show your work. I wish I had that patience to wait to release a piece. Sadly, I don't. Love your work Duende xoxo
Yesterday 3:04pm
We all have our way of writing and posting, that's what makes us unique. You made me smile by saying you love my work. Thanks heaps for your comment & reading list, I appreciate it.
Yesterday 2:19pm
Damn I so relate to this, Duende.
Almost like split personalities....where my creative is the sadist
and my control freak is the masochist...luvin the pain of
organizing a messy mind.
Almost like split personalities....where my creative is the sadist
and my control freak is the masochist...luvin the pain of
organizing a messy mind.
Yesterday 3:18pm
Exactly that, Naajir, couldn't have said it any better. Somehow it's a relief I'm not the only one who edits endlessly. However with your brilliant & creative writing skills I could have known.
Thanks heaps for your comment, the relief & the reading list, it truly is an honor 🙏🏻
Thanks heaps for your comment, the relief & the reading list, it truly is an honor 🙏🏻
Yesterday 2:32pm
That's an interesting view and probably a better one than mine. I usually take a day, maybe a couple before I post. I find myself revising days, weeks, or even years later. Like a professor of mine once said, writing is never finished, it's abandoned.
Yesterday 3:28pm
First off: I don't think one view is better than the other & I see some similarities. You wait too. Thanks heaps for your visit and comment and for leaving your thoughts, I appreciate it :-)
Yesterday 3:30pm
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Yesterday 3:43pm
I used to agonise over posting poems
now I just post how I write unedited
now I just post how I write unedited
Yesterday 4:28pm
yes its the "curse of the re-editing".... I used to do that... wait... I still do that... damn that curse
Yesterday 6:28pm
It takes me weeks to write a batch and then something what started out in a weeks time it's nearly different from my original draft lol... also I can never do prompts, respect to poets who can, I can never do a poem on the spot, anyways happy writing Duende 🙃❤️
Yesterday 7:47pm
Yesterday 9:54pm
The process is everything.
Enjoyed how your put words together to form the embryo that later will breathe with life.
Exquisite tales of a poetess ...
BIG LIKE
💌
Enjoyed how your put words together to form the embryo that later will breathe with life.
Exquisite tales of a poetess ...
BIG LIKE
💌
Yesterday 10:03pm
That editing, overthinking, struggle with control makes it so hard. You never release less than stellar pieces, so it pays off. I wish sometimes I leaned more in that direction myself, sis 💖
Today 2:55am
One of the main reasons that we're here is the many systems, the personality systems, nationality systems, religious systems, etc. The list of systems continue as does the creative processes, our friend Bender once told us he never wrote anything down before hand. He simply wrote and submitted is great pieces, which doesn't work for I_IS_ME. Another great write lady on your system, tight
Today 3:22am
Brilliantly written, Duende. Into the list it belongs. That's a pretty cool process. Listening to music definitely affects my approach. Appreciate you.
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