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M' efer Not Leaving Me
Motherfucker right here thought he can get rid of me
It's impossible to wean you off this pussy you see
It's big and juicy like a pillow sent from above
Now he's telling me he doesn't want this kinda of love
Motherfucker your face was in my ass crack
making all these obscene noises cause you can't hold back
I know I'm delicious and my ass is nutritious
but I never had a tongue go so deep in the back
You wanna tell me that this is all over between us
You got another thing coming if you think you gonna bust somebody else's nut
Cuming down your dick, dripping off your balls
Nobody else had flipped me so fast that I was on all fours
Did you see what I did to you?
Did you feel what this pussy can do?
I sucked you in so deep my womb felt you.
Yet you're telling me we are through
Nah Boo it's not over till I say it's over
until I suck you dry and have you Praying to Jehovah
You know you want this
I see it through your pants
Your dick is so hard
the seams can't even stand a chance
Let's make up or at least fuck it out
not letting that go
Have you not learned what I'm about?
It's impossible to wean you off this pussy you see
It's big and juicy like a pillow sent from above
Now he's telling me he doesn't want this kinda of love
Motherfucker your face was in my ass crack
making all these obscene noises cause you can't hold back
I know I'm delicious and my ass is nutritious
but I never had a tongue go so deep in the back
You wanna tell me that this is all over between us
You got another thing coming if you think you gonna bust somebody else's nut
Cuming down your dick, dripping off your balls
Nobody else had flipped me so fast that I was on all fours
Did you see what I did to you?
Did you feel what this pussy can do?
I sucked you in so deep my womb felt you.
Yet you're telling me we are through
Nah Boo it's not over till I say it's over
until I suck you dry and have you Praying to Jehovah
You know you want this
I see it through your pants
Your dick is so hard
the seams can't even stand a chance
Let's make up or at least fuck it out
not letting that go
Have you not learned what I'm about?
Author's Note
Trying my hand at I_is_Me poem called Mr. Motherfucker. I just thought how would it sound for the girl telling them, that they not going anywhere.
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Re. M' efer Not Leaving Me
11th Oct 2024 5:43pm
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11th Oct 2024 5:57pm
NO! I don't want to be weaned off your .... want more!!!!! A++ Hugs and love, Oral
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11th Oct 2024 6:58pm
The aggression & persuasiveness is highly convincing. A word I don't normally use but I thought it was proper 'badass' lol. Excellent rendering. Breathtaking! 🤣
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11th Oct 2024 7:39pm
We're truly honored lady as any honest person would be, but honestly although there was foreknowledge, there should be surprise. Surprise that someone choose that series to write about, our porn isn't the most popular writing on this site. We think that you have done that poem a great justice, thank you Lady
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11th Oct 2024 7:42pm
It's a good in your face series. That had me laughing most of the time and shocked the other. Enjoyed writing this one.
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12th Oct 2024 6:09am
What an awesome piece this is, Me-style.
I love your use of Boo :-)
"have you Praying to Jehovah" > epic & bold line.
I love your use of Boo :-)
"have you Praying to Jehovah" > epic & bold line.
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14th Oct 2024 6:01pm
👏 👏 👏 😮 👏!! Extremely excellent 👏 ink spill 👏 fia:) you out did yourself with this masterpiece 👌!!
Its like 👍 a role reversal when she make her demands and expect u to cooperate and put up a fight even though he hesitates!!
I love this one fia:) please 🙏 keep on writing ✍ ok 👌 peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖 shalom queen 👸
Its like 👍 a role reversal when she make her demands and expect u to cooperate and put up a fight even though he hesitates!!
I love this one fia:) please 🙏 keep on writing ✍ ok 👌 peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖 shalom queen 👸
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20th Dec 2024 4:37am
The assertive woman deciding that she will decide when it ends. I love it!
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