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The Playful Dead
Fiery hair, black lace frocks
Entangled in her chains and locks
Howls reflect, beyond the night
Chambers blow a flick of light
Satanic verse, read out rites
Satan's curse, ravenous bites
Blazes strip dungeons, rooms
Gothic trips, roses doomed
A thirst for blood, world's apart
Mirrors judge, tainted hearts
Demonic dust, laid bare, bled
From dawn til' dusk... The Playful Dead
Entangled in her chains and locks
Howls reflect, beyond the night
Chambers blow a flick of light
Satanic verse, read out rites
Satan's curse, ravenous bites
Blazes strip dungeons, rooms
Gothic trips, roses doomed
A thirst for blood, world's apart
Mirrors judge, tainted hearts
Demonic dust, laid bare, bled
From dawn til' dusk... The Playful Dead
Published 11th Oct 2024
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11th Oct 2024 8:16am
treading lightly so not to disturb your nocturnal rapture the shadows talk I am wary... great flow...
11th Oct 2024 9:40am
11th Oct 2024 8:45am
11th Oct 2024 9:40am
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11th Oct 2024 12:26pm
11th Oct 2024 2:21pm
Even before reading the second stanza Gothic came to mind.
Love the dark, vampire vibe of it - and that image fits it perfectly.
...now, if only I had found that one 😂
Love the dark, vampire vibe of it - and that image fits it perfectly.
...now, if only I had found that one 😂
11th Oct 2024 3:00pm
11th Oct 2024 3:13pm
Enjoying the light in deep darkness...."I can see clearly now." Hus and love, Oral
11th Oct 2024 8:12pm
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12th Oct 2024 12:24pm
Thank You Damian, were we've discussed music as our inspiration... the opening line of 'The Eagles - Witchy Woman' inspired me, then I went from there haha 🙃❤️
13th Oct 2024 2:21am
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13th Oct 2024 00:53am
Demonic dust? Will you be writing about Demonic lust soon, Pete? I certainly hope so but be careful... Halloween's not for another 18 days yet, so be careful not to run out of ideas, although I can't see that happening; in truth. 🤣
13th Oct 2024 1:28am
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16th Oct 2024 2:23am
I'm late to this fabulous dark write!!
It's creative and interesting.
Roses doomed! Love that.
It's creative and interesting.
Roses doomed! Love that.
16th Oct 2024 12:20pm
