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A Daddy with No Kids .....XXX
I’m your sickness
Codeine and Sprite
Pulling you down
Into my lair of last rites
I’m your addict
Artist, poet and troubadour
Outta red
Slitting my wrist
I need that color bad
I’m your admirer
Old but hard and vigilant
You don’t understand this attraction
Yet you won’t let me leave
I put you on a pedestal
Half looking at your ass
Or up your dress
I put you on a pedestal
I understand your mess
It goes on and on
I’ll never stop coming for you
You like the attention
Faux Daddy
He
Adores
You
Codeine and Sprite
Pulling you down
Into my lair of last rites
I’m your addict
Artist, poet and troubadour
Outta red
Slitting my wrist
I need that color bad
I’m your admirer
Old but hard and vigilant
You don’t understand this attraction
Yet you won’t let me leave
I put you on a pedestal
Half looking at your ass
Or up your dress
I put you on a pedestal
I understand your mess
It goes on and on
I’ll never stop coming for you
You like the attention
Faux Daddy
He
Adores
You
Author's Note
She's got Daddy issues, I got the time...
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Re. A Daddy with No Kids .....
20th Sep 2024 3:34pm
Oh, poet this is really good. What better way to work out those issues than with someone who has time.
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20th Sep 2024 3:37pm
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20th Sep 2024 5:18pm
Re. A Daddy with No Kids .....XXX
20th Sep 2024 11:18pm
I’m your sickness
Codeine and Sprite
You don’t understand this attraction
Yet you won’t let me leave
great lines here. you nail every time. miss ya. <3
Codeine and Sprite
You don’t understand this attraction
Yet you won’t let me leave
great lines here. you nail every time. miss ya. <3
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Re: Re. A Daddy with No Kids .....XXX
21st Sep 2024 00:46am
Re. A Daddy with No Kids .....XXX
21st Sep 2024 4:59am
Forbidden love is very hot. You fuck every hole and give her orgasmic bliss. Keep on writing.
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Re: Re. A Daddy with No Kids .....XXX
21st Sep 2024 9:26am
Re. A Daddy with No Kids .....XXX
21st Sep 2024 11:20am
Those first few lines drew me in immediately.
Love this one, PoetSpeak. Some people are magnets to each other...
Love this one, PoetSpeak. Some people are magnets to each other...
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Re: Re. A Daddy with No Kids .....XXX
21st Sep 2024 11:24am
Yeah. Another poem I reworked from a few years ago. I like the first 4 lines. I'm glad it resonated for you ...
YES, MAGNETS 🧲 👏
Thx D
YES, MAGNETS 🧲 👏
Thx D
Re. A Daddy with No Kids .....XXX
21st Sep 2024 1:15pm
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21st Sep 2024 2:42pm
Re. A Daddy with No Kids .....XXX
22nd Sep 2024 00:02am
Re: Re. A Daddy with No Kids .....XXX
22nd Sep 2024 00:24am
Yeah
I drew from a lot of sources
They were good to me ..
I like writing these rogue writes...
My calling
Thx Pink
I drew from a lot of sources
They were good to me ..
I like writing these rogue writes...
My calling
Thx Pink
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