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Credit in heaven for eating oatmeal ?
Heaven
That's your reward Jack
You're lucky too
You were on the cusp of other places
Remember when you were 12
Jacking off to your aunt with the big boobs
Yeah
Don't think I didn't see that God says
She was pretty hot
Especially to a young buck like you
But that's what coming of age is
Coming .. no pun
Cumming
That's more like it
Back to oatmeal
You died a good death
Quick no fuss no muss heart attack
No lengthy hospital stays
Your ashes were spread in the park
Next to your pets
You lived a good life
Maybe you didn't know it
You had manners though
Counts for a lot getting to heaven
Good job
Hand jobs are free here
Your aunt is on aisle 9
Waiting for you ...
That's your reward Jack
You're lucky too
You were on the cusp of other places
Remember when you were 12
Jacking off to your aunt with the big boobs
Yeah
Don't think I didn't see that God says
She was pretty hot
Especially to a young buck like you
But that's what coming of age is
Coming .. no pun
Cumming
That's more like it
Back to oatmeal
You died a good death
Quick no fuss no muss heart attack
No lengthy hospital stays
Your ashes were spread in the park
Next to your pets
You lived a good life
Maybe you didn't know it
You had manners though
Counts for a lot getting to heaven
Good job
Hand jobs are free here
Your aunt is on aisle 9
Waiting for you ...
Author's Note
Too much coffee this morning
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Re. Credit in heaven for earing oatmeal ?
5th Sep 2024 3:12pm
Jacking off & oatmeal. What more can you ask for before you start your day! Great piece of writing!
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Re: Re. Credit in heaven for earing oatmeal ?
5th Sep 2024 3:13pm
There was fruit in there too..
Apples and multiple kind of berries
Clean living sorta ..
Thanks Thor !
Apples and multiple kind of berries
Clean living sorta ..
Thanks Thor !
Re. Credit in heaven for eating oatmeal ?
5th Sep 2024 3:30pm
Almost time for oatmeal... I can only eat it in winter... love having it on ski trips... intriguing write PS...
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Re: Re. Credit in heaven for eating oatmeal ?
5th Sep 2024 3:37pm
Re. Credit in heaven for eating oatmeal ?
5th Sep 2024 3:52pm
Funny, not everyone makes oatmeal right. Lol.
This comes out of you with how many cups of coffee?
This comes out of you with how many cups of coffee?
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Re: Re. Credit in heaven for eating oatmeal ?
5th Sep 2024 4:12pm
Actually I can only drink 1/3 of a cup of coffee.
Otherwise I get mental lol …
Otherwise I get mental lol …
Re. Credit in heaven for eating oatmeal ?
5th Sep 2024 4:33pm
Most southern dudes have manners, we would like to think that we do also regardless of the poetry. We read once they ask this dude over one hundred, "what did he credit with living so long?". He stated he ate a bowl of oatmeal and a tomato everyday. We think that he meant a real tomato not genetic modified crap. Tight
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Re: Re. Credit in heaven for eating oatmeal ?
5th Sep 2024 4:36pm
Maybe his aid was a real tomato 🍅...
Either way it's a milestone and keep working your Southern charm. Nothing like good manners to brighten anyone's day ..
3 comments today from you...gonna play lotto !!
Thanks ✋
Either way it's a milestone and keep working your Southern charm. Nothing like good manners to brighten anyone's day ..
3 comments today from you...gonna play lotto !!
Thanks ✋
Re: Re. Credit in heaven for eating oatmeal ?
5th Sep 2024 4:41pm
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5th Sep 2024 4:52pm
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Re: Re. Credit in heaven for eating oatmeal ?
5th Sep 2024 6:17pm
Do I have to face the corner ?
If I do I might have my hand in my pants ….
Just saying ….
If I do I might have my hand in my pants ….
Just saying ….
Re. Credit in heaven for eating oatmeal ?
5th Sep 2024 6:39pm
I deserve some credit, lol! Well, no, actually YOU deserve much credit. When I read this, broadly speaking, I said, 'This is PoetSpeak's return to form.' It is very PoetSpeak, the way you wrote it. It's a 'big like' from me, certainly. 👍
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Re: Re. Credit in heaven for eating oatmeal ?
5th Sep 2024 7:18pm
I’m glad you like it Billy and thank you for all the grammatical help. I wrote it this morning FAST when I was buzzed on coffee and didn’t proof it enough.
It’s great that you picked up on my error …
My aunt wouldn’t be happy either and would have told my mom and that would have gotten dicey ….
They are all in heaven partying down I hope !!
Appreciate the BIG LIKE
Fun one to write
It’s great that you picked up on my error …
My aunt wouldn’t be happy either and would have told my mom and that would have gotten dicey ….
They are all in heaven partying down I hope !!
Appreciate the BIG LIKE
Fun one to write
Re. Credit in heaven for eating oatmeal ?
6th Sep 2024 1:04am
Oatmeal on woman' sexy naked body is hot. Eat her out then give a great fucking and she will be saying no don't stop. Keep on writing.
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Re: Re. Credit in heaven for eating oatmeal ?
6th Sep 2024 1:07am
Re. Credit in heaven for eating oatmeal ?
6th Sep 2024 1:15am
OMG you are the worst... and the best!! Thanks for making me laugh. This is so quintessentially YOU, I'm gonna have to keep it. 😆😊
❤️k
❤️k
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Re: Re. Credit in heaven for eating oatmeal ?
6th Sep 2024 3:55am
I take wholesome and dirty it up a bit.
All in good fun. Even my wife laughed.
She's kind of proper at times but knew she was marrying dirty rogue.
Think my aunt is smiling from above too...
Thanks for your comment and RL
Appreciate you RED ❤
All in good fun. Even my wife laughed.
She's kind of proper at times but knew she was marrying dirty rogue.
Think my aunt is smiling from above too...
Thanks for your comment and RL
Appreciate you RED ❤
Re. Credit in heaven for eating oatmeal ?
6th Sep 2024 2:51am
Re: Re. Credit in heaven for eating oatmeal ?
6th Sep 2024 3:58am
So many goddamn fantasies about her.
What a rack too.
My poor mom had to clean my stained sheets. Don't think she would have dug my Aunt fantasies. They didn't get along that well. It was quite a time Betty....
What a rack too.
My poor mom had to clean my stained sheets. Don't think she would have dug my Aunt fantasies. They didn't get along that well. It was quite a time Betty....
Re. Credit in heaven for eating oatmeal ?
7th Sep 2024 4:40pm
Re: Re. Credit in heaven for eating oatmeal ?
7th Sep 2024 4:44pm
Nothing like a little incest at a young age to set up my rogue life...
I never claim innocence, it's not respected and I know better...
All rise for dirty poems.
Colonel O will be be by soon with the collection plate ..
I never claim innocence, it's not respected and I know better...
All rise for dirty poems.
Colonel O will be be by soon with the collection plate ..
Re. Credit in heaven for eating oatmeal ?
7th Sep 2024 5:00pm
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7th Sep 2024 5:01pm
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7th Sep 2024 5:04pm
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7th Sep 2024 5:05pm
Re. Credit in heaven for eating oatmeal ?
12th Sep 2024 11:53am
Looks like he knows what matters.
Who wants a lengthy hospital stay when your aunt is waiting is isle 9?
I love this, PS.
It puts things in perspective.
Who wants a lengthy hospital stay when your aunt is waiting is isle 9?
I love this, PS.
It puts things in perspective.
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Re: Re. Credit in heaven for eating oatmeal ?
12th Sep 2024 12:46pm
Boring oatmeal seems to be the key of my life lately. Paying for rogue life or enhancing it. Don't know. Cleaning up isn't so bad. Little cheats seem like a big deal and the aftermath isn't so tragic.
Thanks Mary
Appreciate !
Thanks Mary
Appreciate !
Re. Credit in heaven for eating oatmeal ?
1st Oct 2024 00:23am
Re: Re. Credit in heaven for eating oatmeal ?
1st Oct 2024 00:27am
Definitely one of my crazier writes.
Glad to get your praise always!!
Thanks so much Wally
Glad to get your praise always!!
Thanks so much Wally