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NO, I DON'T WANT YOU
WHEN
I think about
YOU,
when I
read your words,
when I imagine
YOU,
when I dream
about YOU;
NO
I don't want YOU.
I honestly crave
you, lust for YOU.
WANT is too weak to
describe how strong
MY DESIRE
is for you.
How can I not
worship and bow before
you as the perfect lover?
I think about
YOU,
when I
read your words,
when I imagine
YOU,
when I dream
about YOU;
NO
I don't want YOU.
I honestly crave
you, lust for YOU.
WANT is too weak to
describe how strong
MY DESIRE
is for you.
How can I not
worship and bow before
you as the perfect lover?
Published 27th Aug 2024
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27th Aug 2024 3:41pm
Love this & the wording. Nicely arranged with a smooth flow. Great!
27th Aug 2024 3:56pm
I love this. How you started off stating "I don't want you." makes one believe that you were going to write a poem of good bye but it changes to a Crave poem. Nice
27th Aug 2024 4:49pm
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