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The Book
While mist
Not quite rain
smeared the windshield
And my head in a book
That described a red headed girl
but a child really
Who survived a wilderness
Wild with the screams of Natives
as I avoided the rearview mirror
Whose eyes who knew me too well
In spaces I had yet to introduce myself
Where they danced on ground
Hallowed out by a lineage without
my blue eyes and peculiar stare
A yellow line and highway disappeared behind me
And the distance from it now
A created space outlined by heartache
out the smeared front window
I looked up and glanced at the horizon
It had come faster than I anticipated
My story would have to end for the evening
there was a noticeable loss of light
Not quite rain
smeared the windshield
And my head in a book
That described a red headed girl
but a child really
Who survived a wilderness
Wild with the screams of Natives
as I avoided the rearview mirror
Whose eyes who knew me too well
In spaces I had yet to introduce myself
Where they danced on ground
Hallowed out by a lineage without
my blue eyes and peculiar stare
A yellow line and highway disappeared behind me
And the distance from it now
A created space outlined by heartache
out the smeared front window
I looked up and glanced at the horizon
It had come faster than I anticipated
My story would have to end for the evening
there was a noticeable loss of light
Written by
Bonanza1
Published 11th Aug 2024
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11th Aug 2024 11:20pm
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16th Aug 2024 3:24am
I really enjoy your style of writing. It's approachable, without any heaviness to it. Just a joy to read, relaxed.
You're really good at what you do here.
You're really good at what you do here.
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Re: Re. The Book
18th Aug 2024 00:47am
I nominated this for poem of the month.
It is quite good and deserves recognition of such.
It is quite good and deserves recognition of such.
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