Birthed

I just read it three times. You've got a decent style

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DL  

The couplet format works so well with this...

Thanks so much for your commentary and kind words. The RL means a lot to me. Appreciate you.

DL

I agree that you learn things after getting hurt. I love the locus part of eating flesh

Thanks so much for your commentary and kind words. I liked that line as well. Appreciate you.

DL

There's some truth to this, regarding the journey of life in general.  One seems to contemplate purpose, and life, and man's juxtaposition, and such is "disposed", as you've written here.  There is a lot said here, in the life journey, so to speak, that makes one wonder.  I like the "harvest" type metaphor in what "grows" in the uncertainty of what you convey.  Anyway, good write all around.  Thanks for sharing.

Thanks so much for your commentary and kind words. Makes me feel like a real poet. I've always considered myself a lyricist, that's working on poetry. Appreciate you.


DL