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Drifting Thoughts
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Drifting Thoughts
Ocean in motion
Waves crash as I drift afar
Let my thoughts take me
Written by
Vision_of_insanity
Published
28th Jul 2024
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Re. Drifting Thoughts
fianaturie8
(Fia Naturie)
- Edited 28th Jul 2024 00:48am
28th Jul 2024 00:47am
This really resonates with me. My mind often drifts when looking out at the ocean. Love it Fia xoxo
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Vision_of_insanity
28th Jul 2024 1:00am
Thank you again Fia. I'm happy that you enjoyed this piece.
XOX
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Re. Drifting Thoughts
Pinkdreams
28th Jul 2024 7:30am
Nice. The ocean is a great place to let one's thoughts do as they will. I like the vibe I got from this haiku.
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Vision_of_insanity
28th Jul 2024 11:52am
Thank you for the kind words and RL. Appreciated!
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Re. Drifting Thoughts
Honoria
28th Jul 2024 10:40am
Dear V,
I very much enjoyed the imagery of this poem. A very soothing and calming feel. Lovely write. H🌷
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Vision_of_insanity
28th Jul 2024 11:52am
Thank you Honoria. Appreciated.
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Re. Drifting Thoughts
AfterSexDilemma
9th Aug 2024 6:43pm
I think this is very nice. I love watching the waves
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Vision_of_insanity
9th Aug 2024 7:12pm
Me too. Thanks for the feedback!
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