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The Horses
guided by sounds
i enter a state of
deep relaxation
the song swells
takes me over
makes me see
healing horses
galloping & free
envision it's me
after the session
talking over tea
i told her about
what it did to me
visions that came
she saw them too
galloping horses
it made us smile
i'm so grateful for
the beauty of our
bond, and how we
connect energetically
i enter a state of
deep relaxation
the song swells
takes me over
makes me see
healing horses
galloping & free
envision it's me
after the session
talking over tea
i told her about
what it did to me
visions that came
she saw them too
galloping horses
it made us smile
i'm so grateful for
the beauty of our
bond, and how we
connect energetically
Published 24th Jul 2024
Author's Note
Skyborn by Ivan Torrent.
https://youtu.be/ob0AxwrlnXc
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24th Jul 2024 2:58pm
One of my spirit animals is a horse so I can totally relate to this. They carry you across the rough terrain of life when you need their strength.
I'm loving this new direction you're taking!
XO
I'm loving this new direction you're taking!
XO
25th Jul 2024 7:24am
Horses being such wise creatures I can understand they belong to your spirit animals.
Working holistically is certainly the right direction. Thanks heaps for your comment.
Working holistically is certainly the right direction. Thanks heaps for your comment.
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24th Jul 2024 3:15pm
We totally love horses, wild horses doing and acting like horses are supposed to. We love the pic and this piece, tight Lady
25th Jul 2024 7:28am
24th Jul 2024 4:16pm
Dear D,
I enjoyed the gentle flow of this write. The imagery of the horses, wild and free was exquisite. The liberating release of emotion, envisioning them through the experience in your poem was absolutely lovely. H🌷
I enjoyed the gentle flow of this write. The imagery of the horses, wild and free was exquisite. The liberating release of emotion, envisioning them through the experience in your poem was absolutely lovely. H🌷
25th Jul 2024 7:38am
Dear H, gotta love horses who are wild and free. Thanks heaps for your comment, it means a lot that you could envision the release of emotion through the experience in my piece 💕
24th Jul 2024 5:20pm
This has a pulse...a heartbeat of hooves thundering through it. I can't even imagine what the experience must have felt like. Internal stampede. I need some of this, sis 💖
25th Jul 2024 7:42am
"This has a pulse...a heartbeat of hooves thundering through it" > you truly got this piece. Thanks heaps for your amazing comment. You certainly deserve some of this, sis 💖
24th Jul 2024 5:37pm
This is interesting... I'v never been close to horses but they say they have healing powers... I enjoyed reading his
25th Jul 2024 7:53am
So happy you enjoyed reading this & found it interesting. Thanks heaps for your comment :-)
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31st Jul 2024 7:31am
Beautifully written. Really dig the flow and elegant vibe. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
31st Jul 2024 7:38am
That means a lot to me. Thanks heaps for your visit & comment, I appreciate you :-)
24th Aug 2024 7:25am
You always come thru with some profound uniqueness
in you approach to poetry, Duende.
I'm diggin the intimacy expressed here...
Just lovely..
in you approach to poetry, Duende.
I'm diggin the intimacy expressed here...
Just lovely..
24th Aug 2024 11:24am
It really was a special experience. Thanks for your comment, I appreciate you, Naajir.
7th Oct 2024 4:09pm
Hmm, it’s been a while since I’ve ridden a horse. It’s something magical to feel the power and speed of a horse in full gallop. Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece.
8th Oct 2024 10:48am
First off: I'm stoked to see you back. Horses, with their power, speed and strong intuition are magical creatures for sure. Thanks heaps for your visit and comment, you made my day :-)
