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Fair Weather
Some super hero
I cannot be
a mirage
expected of me
Will not pretend
nor wear a mask
not your place
to even ask
Unfair request
to comfort you
in spite of struggle
which does pursue
Life not yours
to dictate
what is best
as mine you hate
Felicity found
unknown to you
your decision
to not pursue
Will not defend
choices made
so you are kept
at ease in shade
I cannot be
a mirage
expected of me
Will not pretend
nor wear a mask
not your place
to even ask
Unfair request
to comfort you
in spite of struggle
which does pursue
Life not yours
to dictate
what is best
as mine you hate
Felicity found
unknown to you
your decision
to not pursue
Will not defend
choices made
so you are kept
at ease in shade
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Re. Fair Weather
16th Jul 2024 2:17am
Brilliant write. Nice flow. Into the list it belongs. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
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Re: Re. Fair Weather
16th Jul 2024 3:01am
Thank you DL. Honoured by RL. What a lovely thing to say❤️ Appreciate you too🙏
Bless
Mel
Bless
Mel
Re. Fair Weather
16th Jul 2024 2:26am
First it’s nice to see you. Also, what a lovely construct. It read beautifully and the content as powerful as always. Exquisite.
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Re: Re. Fair Weather
16th Jul 2024 3:06am
Dear Thor,
Thank you lovely. It has been a minute…been lacking muse and concentration. So pleased you like it🙏 Also, I appreciate reading list❤️ Hope you are well.
Bless
Mel
Thank you lovely. It has been a minute…been lacking muse and concentration. So pleased you like it🙏 Also, I appreciate reading list❤️ Hope you are well.
Bless
Mel
Re. Fair Weather
16th Jul 2024 3:01am
Re. Fair Weather
16th Jul 2024 6:00am
Dear M,
This piece made me think of relationships that are unhealthy and lopsided in their reciprocity. The last stanza is an awesome spotlight for me, in not covering for others behavior. Your ability to dig deep and draw out life’s circumstances is so raw and touching. Excellent writing. H🌷
This piece made me think of relationships that are unhealthy and lopsided in their reciprocity. The last stanza is an awesome spotlight for me, in not covering for others behavior. Your ability to dig deep and draw out life’s circumstances is so raw and touching. Excellent writing. H🌷
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Re: Re. Fair Weather
16th Jul 2024 6:38am
Dear H,
Yes! Spot on! Had a kinda fall out with a friend of over 30 years. She is in the US so we are far apart now. Some long term inequalities came to a head. It’s disappointing and sad. We will always be friends but right now it feels jaded😢 Anyway, thank you for the read and compliment. It’s nice to hear from you❤️
Bless🙏
Mel
Yes! Spot on! Had a kinda fall out with a friend of over 30 years. She is in the US so we are far apart now. Some long term inequalities came to a head. It’s disappointing and sad. We will always be friends but right now it feels jaded😢 Anyway, thank you for the read and compliment. It’s nice to hear from you❤️
Bless🙏
Mel
Re. Fair Weather
16th Jul 2024 11:02am
Mel,
Damn it's been a long time. Hope all is well with you. What a poem!! Raw, real and such an honest write. Great to see you back.
Keith
Damn it's been a long time. Hope all is well with you. What a poem!! Raw, real and such an honest write. Great to see you back.
Keith
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Re: Re. Fair Weather
16th Jul 2024 11:11am
Hi lovely Keith,
Yes, it’s been a minute! Thank you for your welcome back response🙏 I definitely felt exposed when writing this. Hope you are well my friend❤️
Bless
Mel
Yes, it’s been a minute! Thank you for your welcome back response🙏 I definitely felt exposed when writing this. Hope you are well my friend❤️
Bless
Mel
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16th Jul 2024 11:57pm
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