Wound

I like the choice to use conjugate, it lends to a more stark monotonous compulsion. Also, the mask, hiding your deep hurting sexuality. Everything held beneath the scab as you became the wound, yet paradoxically you constantly claw at the scab to be free. That how I took anyway, great poem.

I’m always fascinated by wounds and how they heal or don’t.  Part physical, part mental, part other …
Appreciate your detailed analysis.  I could probably use some couch time …😆

We all could.

I’d go if they served refreshments

Well written & well received. I can feel the pain. Nicely said my friend.

As long as you can feel it I’ll continue to write ..

Thx Mister

I love you let's take a walk on the wild side do you remember me Lou?

Lou Lou Lou
If course I remember you Brenda
Keep the faith woman

This is great. Impactful metaphor. Reminds me a bit of Paul Simon's I am a rock. Stark emotional truth combined with minimalism makes this powerful.

It’s true
I see the Paul Simon correlation.  Love him to that’s high praise !!  I’m into this stripped down writing phase.  Deliver with less and still impactful !

BIG THANKS WENDY

There is so much in this short piece. Talk about low key profound!

No art
No authors note
Just red meat

Thx W

Raw

You know it Boss

Stay close

Can relate to this message in alot of ways🤫 😊

Righteous Stoney

I dig it !!

It's a blessing to see that there are still grown man that are unafraid to express their strength and pain that we sometimes try to hide behind the mask 🪬🙏📿

Yes
Gotta roll with the good and bad, it's a mixed bag life  ..

FOSHO INDEED 👍

Can relate to this message in alot of ways🤫 😊

Glad you could relate.  
It's good to have company
Thx

You are the captain of all rhe ladies.  Keep on writing.

It's true.
Women adore me ...
My unit is magical..

Dear PS,

Unapologetic. We should all be so truthful about who we are. Righteous write. And this is why you remain the sheriff!
Big Dig! ❤️
H🌷

Dear H,

Yeah, no apologies

I woke up thus rainy morning thinking about obsession and the wonder and glory of it.

I am still the Sheriff and this place could use some cleaning up.  A lot of people left DUP and it's too bad but we remain and so it goes ..

Dog walk time, rain or shine

Thanks H

🤠❤

Sex and pain sounds like my kinda cocktail.
Short piece, yet so very powerful. LOVE.

Yeah, sex without pain, I don't even know what that is ... rough and ready ..always

Appreciate the Love..

Thx

Strong poem for so little said amigo!!

What's that expression ?
More with less
Minimalism Rocks Adel

Thx

Short and abstract, now folks will want to take a closer look
BL

I definitely want them closer.
There's plenty of scab to go around ..

Thx Wally