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Kissed by the Rain
Heat
Steam rising off the skin
Sun
deep kissed
leaving a love bite
Cool
Drops
On thirsty sheath
Invisible hand
Pulls head
Back
Open
Mouth
Drowning in
ethereal
jizz
Cloths
Expendable
Drenched
Steam rising off the skin
Sun
deep kissed
leaving a love bite
Cool
Drops
On thirsty sheath
Invisible hand
Pulls head
Back
Open
Mouth
Drowning in
ethereal
jizz
Cloths
Expendable
Drenched
Written by
fianaturie8
(Fia Naturie)
Published 23rd Jun 2024
| Edited 24th Jun 2024
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Re. Kissed by the Rain
Anonymous
23rd Jun 2024 3:33am
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23rd Jun 2024 4:00am
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23rd Jun 2024 7:06am
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23rd Jun 2024 12:22pm
Re. Kissed by the Rain
23rd Jun 2024 7:06am
Visualisable picture painted imagining someone showering in rain that comes amidst a heatwave.
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23rd Jun 2024 12:23pm
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23rd Jun 2024 6:21pm
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Anonymous
23rd Jun 2024 6:09pm
Sex is heat, is sweat like rain, is lying in the sun of erotic euphoria.
Nice one, Fia.
Nice one, Fia.
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23rd Jun 2024 6:22pm
Re. Kissed by the Rain
23rd Jun 2024 10:35pm
Yaaaas! Money shot baby! Love that deep-conditioning bodywash.
Great job with this, you emphasized everything really well.
Great job with this, you emphasized everything really well.
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23rd Jun 2024 10:41pm
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24th Jun 2024 12:59pm
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24th Jun 2024 1:15pm
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24th Jun 2024 1:28pm
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24th Jun 2024 8:22pm
Fia,
I enjoy, very much, this cryptically sensual piece that allows my imagination to paint captivating, erotic image with your beautifully worded prompts. Brava!
I enjoy, very much, this cryptically sensual piece that allows my imagination to paint captivating, erotic image with your beautifully worded prompts. Brava!
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24th Jun 2024 8:37pm
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