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Pill
Bloodshot eyes stare wildly
Just looking for a reason
Chemicals come on mildly
Within the mystic season
Watching stars drift slowly
I cast my gaze inward
Walking amongst the lowly
My skin feels awkward
Panic races through fear
Walking across the wire
Muted sound going clear
As my pulse spikes higher
Crash off the fucking cliff
Connection has went offline
All my limbs growing stiff
On prescriptions I dine
For whatever makes us ill
They’ll invent another pill
Just looking for a reason
Chemicals come on mildly
Within the mystic season
Watching stars drift slowly
I cast my gaze inward
Walking amongst the lowly
My skin feels awkward
Panic races through fear
Walking across the wire
Muted sound going clear
As my pulse spikes higher
Crash off the fucking cliff
Connection has went offline
All my limbs growing stiff
On prescriptions I dine
For whatever makes us ill
They’ll invent another pill
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22nd Jun 2024 12:17pm
That is so on point. They will create a pill for anything. 😩. Love this ink. ❤️ Fia xoxo
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22nd Jun 2024 9:19pm
Brilliantly written.
I really liked, "chemicals come on mildly" it's almost as if, it is the bare minimum to help but keeps us stuck in a loop of wanting it more.
Unfortunately this is true; they make a pill for it all. I enjoyed this piece my friend.
Thank you for sharing.
I really liked, "chemicals come on mildly" it's almost as if, it is the bare minimum to help but keeps us stuck in a loop of wanting it more.
Unfortunately this is true; they make a pill for it all. I enjoyed this piece my friend.
Thank you for sharing.
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