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Down
My kisses
amble slow,
far from hers,
and well below
amble slow,
far from hers,
and well below
Published 21st May 2024
Author's Note
10w rhyme, still struggling with writers block
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22nd May 2024 9:04pm
23rd May 2024 5:46pm
I agree with Oral. This is good opening. sometimes depending on the topic, I listen to certain music to get me in the right head space. But the words will come to you in time.
Great opening. Fia xoxo
Great opening. Fia xoxo
