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There's Chocolate in Heaven
Here lies ChocoLaaTTe
No big deal of a few molars
In the end we all rot the same
It's not because I ate too much
(chocolate)
Here I may lay
But in heaven
Most likely eating
(More chocolate)
Published 5th May 2024
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5th May 2024 9:16am
I love this. Gave me the biggest smile.
I LOVE chocolate.
Love the dark humor.
I LOVE chocolate.
Love the dark humor.
I'm glad I was able to give you a smile!
:) yes! Chocolate is so good..
Appreciate your visit.
♡
:) yes! Chocolate is so good..
Appreciate your visit.
♡
5th May 2024 10:00am
5th May 2024 4:59pm
Anonymous
5th May 2024 11:50am
Lindt 70% cocoa is my favorite. And I always brush my teeth after eating a piece or two. :)
5th May 2024 5:02pm
Maybe I should try that out! Haha.
I love to try different brands...
But I once got an opportunity to try some belgian truffles...
Cannot even begin... very gentle yet sweet
..omg!
Thanks for your visit
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I love to try different brands...
But I once got an opportunity to try some belgian truffles...
Cannot even begin... very gentle yet sweet
..omg!
Thanks for your visit
◇
5th May 2024 2:32pm
Good.. glad you told me.. so I don’t have to take a box of chocolate with me… ok I’ll give you a bar over there … just because I like you .. and I love this poem… ok maybe two bars
5th May 2024 5:03pm
Thanks Sam..!
You're so sweet.
This gave me a big smile.
I appreciate it.
(Btw I'm taking all your chocolates!)
♡
You're so sweet.
This gave me a big smile.
I appreciate it.
(Btw I'm taking all your chocolates!)
♡
7th Jun 2024 4:35am
Love this poem. It made me smile inside and gave me something to feel good about even in its darkness. Indeed chocolate in heaven is a happy thought. And losing molars happens even to those who don't eat chocolate.
John
John
12th Jun 2024 12:16pm
Thank you John...!
I really appreciate your sweet comment :)
I wish you sweet cocoa heaven as well!
♡
I really appreciate your sweet comment :)
I wish you sweet cocoa heaven as well!
♡
